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hardcandy101
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseHey you told me to read your story in one of the reviews you left me so i did and i luved it you were so right its awesome!
Crazy 80's Babe
2008-03-23
ch 4,
abuseupdate update i love it
candyycane21
2008-03-23
ch 4,
abusewow, josh is so...
well i guess alicia can get together with jake now?
hmm and at the end josh will realize that he was being a jealous idiot. =]
lol. nice chapter.
ForeverPreppy619
2008-03-22
ch 4,
abuseHave josh apologize be cuz alosh = my life
LovePeaceHappiness
2008-03-21
ch 4,
abuseLove it
Jake seem so awesome and nice
And wat did josh do to alicia
I was confused in that part
Please update
QueenIrene
2008-03-21
ch 4,
abuseThis is so good! I feel bad for Alicia!
PeaceLove.SayWhat
2008-03-21
ch 3,
abuseLove your story, it's original. I like that it's mostly about Alicia, she's one of my favorite characters. Update Soon!

~PL.SW~
LovePeaceHappiness
2008-03-21
ch 2,
abuselove love it
hehe please update soon
candyycane21
2008-03-21
ch 3,
abuseoo i like.
anna seems cool. hmm. maybe she can get together with alicia's boyfriend? lol. idk.
Swimmergirl
2008-03-21
ch 3,
abuseits chanel NOT channel
The Serial Kisser
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseit's not something that's been done before, so it's pretty cool. ;) it's mostly about alicia? i hope more exciting things happen, awesome story, update :)
Smiling.and.Laughing.is.Lif...
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abusei liked it. pretty good. i will be looking for an update.

love,
holly
kelsey1234
2008-03-20
ch 3,
abuseThis is great! I LUHV IT! You should definetly keep writing and I'll keep writing mine. BTW, thanks for the review on my story. Also, I just wanted to make sure you knew that at one point Alicia says 'Rose' when Jake asks who it is.
QueenIrene
2008-03-20
ch 3,
abuseAwesome! pms
QueenIrene
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseOOH! Awesome! THis is so good!
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