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| Reviews for Another World That Wasn't What It Had Promised To |
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   snake of slytherin 3/29/08 . chapter 1nice short story! Please go on writing! |
| AJeff 3/21/08 . chapter 1 Beautifully written. Hope you'll write more. |
| anamcharalove 3/21/08 . chapter 1 That was a nice short story. However, I think it would have been nice if you had Miss Parker meet Jarod on the Web or something. Just an idea for a sequel. I think you did well for English not being your first language. Hoping for a sequel! |
