|Reviews for Another World That Wasn't What It Had Promised To|
| snake of slytherin 3/29/08 . chapter 1
nice short story!
Please go on writing!
| AJeff 3/21/08 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. Hope you'll write more.
| anamcharalove 3/21/08 . chapter 1
That was a nice short story. However, I think it would have been nice if you had Miss Parker meet Jarod on the Web or something. Just an idea for a sequel. I think you did well for English not being your first language. Hoping for a sequel!