Reviews for Dedicated to Peter

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hope4sall 2008-05-27 ch 16,	abuseBTW - I read all of these when I was on spring break vacation and never reviewed. I loved them, which is what got me to MOB. Writing short snippets - not so easy - and you did a great job.
sparkyCSI 2008-03-26 ch 16,	abuseVery nice and now I'm singing along with half your songs! While I like Lindsay, I have no problem with Lindsay bashing and heck, I want to sic my OC, Cory on her! Anyway, Aphina told me to take a gander and now that I've hit a slight road block with my story, I have a little time! Good job!
laplandgurl 2008-03-26 ch 16,	abuseHey - greetings from another Canadian ff writer and I happen to hail from the East Coast - and I am a Stomping Tom Connors fan - anyway I am enjoying your writing - boy you all are not fans of Lindsay's character - and it's nice to see more about Adam - he deserves more time in the limelight.
Aphina 2008-03-25 ch 16,	abuselol the end enearly made me cry it was so perfect! Seriusly your a very skiled writer and it really moved me to read this. I'll be getting to your other story at some pont maybe later tonight or tomorrow!
Aphina 2008-03-25 ch 15,	abuselol we ain't betaing darling we're just reviewing. Seriously though, this chapter was moving I felt my heart wrench, because I really felt for Sam! i loved the fact Flack was there for her, it made me want to hug them both. You do well inflicting your audience with powerful emotions.
Aphina 2008-03-25 ch 14,	abuselmao, I thought ir was going to be danny, buy I'd stick with Flack any day! it was fab to see them having some girl time.
Aphina 2008-03-25 ch 13,	abuseLMAO romantic and happy moment. I'm gad to see them all acting like a family. It was really sweet to see how they all interact with eachother and thieir spouses. I think you've also done a great job of showing what a being a parent feels like.
Aphina 2008-03-25 ch 12,	abuseI'm cheering here! Go Danny. (I've never liked Linds) seriously though i liked the sound of the new grl and whats been happening in the past seven months for these guys. just got the review reply. Over weekends i'm usually a littl ahrd to get hold of from sunday totues. That's when my partner in crime comes and stays over so i'm on the net less. I should be busy with school work. I', going to ctach up on a few chapters here, then do the dishes and then come back to story number two of yours.
Aphina 2008-03-25 ch 11,	abuseHey, I think you just broke my heart. i loved readnig this. the background was so relaistic nd heart wrenching, i enjpyed readin and getting to knwo the things that make up don Flack and how it affected his future. That bit at the end was a stroke of genuious. it really tore at my heart whenhe begged her to ay those words and I lvoed the fact she said them. Sporry i haven't had time to read or review yet I've been buss the last few days.
Bluehaven4220 2008-03-23 ch 16,	abuseYOU, madam, have made this truly enjoyable. And in chapter 12, Morgan's mom has my first name :D. I was so excited to see you had posted something, I didn't even know you'd written anything, but now I know and I'm very glad you did. oops, I'm babbling. Oh, and I wanted to tell you that I looked up DSAH, and I have to say, your son is absolutely adorable. I was wondering if you could tell me when and how he was diagnosed? That picture of him in the chicken suit made me melt. Keep your head up, and keep writing, I can't wait to see more from you. Regards, Erica (Bluehaven4220)
EddiesGirl 2008-03-23 ch 15,	abusewow, I was only away for a couple of days and you've done tons! I loved it, especially Samantha, Flack totally needs a strong woman! And Lindsay bashing is well deserved, I dont really like her anyway! I hope against hope that u do another story involving the characters! Well done!
Aphina 2008-03-23 ch 10,	abuseLol loved the beer flicking, I so would have done that. it realy charachterises Alexis with the fact she's taking notes lol. Seriously I loved this chapter it was so fun!
Madison Bellows 2008-03-22 ch 14,	abuseOh how true...loved your take on a girl's night out!
Madison Bellows 2008-03-22 ch 13,	abuseThis one made my heart and tummy get all fuzzy in a way girly way (which is a feat and a good thing!).
Madison Bellows 2008-03-22 ch 12,	abuseTres interesting. I would say more, but that would give away my plans for WIMs. :)

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