a baby Draco is so cute. Glad to see that Harry
is treating Sev nice. please up soon

This is an oddly appealing story. It's interesting seeing a young, innocent Severus, and the physiological cross of eggs and pouch is very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming chapters. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

loved it so far

haha!! cute!

Severus is shorter than Harry? Anything else different that we should know?

Is there going to be ANY part actually resembling SEVERUS in this fic?! Since it's an extreme AU I don't even talk about circumstances; I understand changing those or looks, upbringing, skills, talents etc. - just basic personality.
So far I can see absolutely no similiarities of any character to their portrayal in HP! Aside from their names, which isn't enough by far. They are completely different in every way so I really don't get why you label this HP, even HP-AU.

It would work IMO a lot better as an original fic! Then it might be much more enjoyable for the reader, rather than constantly boggling just who these persons are supposed to be...

Haha! It's almost funny how Severus is playing the more sensitive character (Harry) while Harry plays the stronger and firmer one (Severus). But I like this change, it seems to suit them.

I love your fic, bye.

i have no words to describe this fic, it's brilliant and great, i mean how sev is the sweet one, gotta say i love it!! but i got lost as to where they live and exactly what is sev... other than that i say you shud continue it :D

Whoever they are, BoilerBunny is an idiot as you did post this as an AU right at the beginning.

I nearly squealed in delight that someone else has envisioned humanoids with pouches. Yours seem to be more avian where mine are marsupial, but it was neat to see another person envision this as it at least affirms I may not be crazy after all. (grins)

Also loved the fact that you do have Severus as the sensitive one. Not only do I love creatureSnape fics, but an occasional (stated) AU with him is a treat from all the purely canon fics.

Okay, enough gushing. Here's my one problem with the story.

Even after a second read through, I'm still confused about who is who status wise and where they are. Severus is the drygun and a prince, but is Harry one as well? And where are they living? Is Severus living in Harry's country or is Harry living in Severus's? Those points are a bit muddled to me.

Other than that I am loving it and will place it on my Story Alert.

I thought this was so interesting, so i kept reading, and it turned out to be really good! update soon!

brilliant!! please do continue. it is refreshing to see Sev as the innocent one in the relationship.

wow. i really like this and can't wait to read the next part. this is a really original idea.

Erm, I don't what to say. I don't want to be rude and I know how hard it is to get a charter right when it comes to a very different plot that we are so use to from the books. But in this, both Severus and Harry's character are very...OOC. Perhaps it will work if the characters was swapped around? Then it could be good. But if not, I can't seem to finish reading this. But I know I'm sure others will enjoy this. But as a reader and writer of Snarry, I give you this review of my own and I hope you take this advice as useful rather than a flame.

This is just. . .I have no words.