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VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 8,
abuseI cannot believe Bogg is really going to tell Tricia the whole story about Jeff and has even planned their reunion. Get out the smelling salts and the fainting couch, I feel we'll be needing them shortly. Well, now, Bogg has fell in love with yet another member of the opposite sex. Figures! LOL! What a beautiful and touching scene as Tricia and Jeff are reunited after such a long period. And wow, Bogg has his guidebook back. Another excellent chapter and a fabulous ending to yet another great Voyagers story!!
VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 7,
abuseMaybe you should retitle this chapter as "Destined to Fade" Kinda seems more appropriate. Some of the plot of this story reminds me of a similar one used in two Doctor Who episodes where the Doctor's past selves were transported to help his current self deal with a major universe-breaking problem. I loved the idea in Doctor Who and it's also great here. Loved the "I had no sense of fashion." and "Couldn't Bogg spring for you a new outfit?" statements coming from the older Jeff. Absolutely hilarious. Drakeula! There hasn't been a better name for Drake..ROFLOL! Good work Ms. Bogg!
VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 6,
abuseThis story is great! Bogg's meeting with the more mature Jeff and their reunion, absolutely terrific. And even after being in all that danger, there's still room for some humor. Loved the part about 'cleaning the goop out of places you didn't even know you had." I love the part where Drake gets sealed up in the cellar. Way to go! Ok, are we transgressing the laws of time here. Two Jeff's in the same time zone are about to meet. There should be some rule in the Voyager handbook about this... LOL! Love the Cyrano humor.
VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 5,
abuseOMG, Bogg's dead, at the hands of Drake. "The Beams landed on the tatters of tan suede.", I can't believe it. What an excellent introduction to this terrible scene. I hope you have plans for bringing him back to life or I might have a few cross words. LOL! The dirty rotten scoundrel Nicky, he'll get what's coming to him for sure. Another great chapter.
VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 4,
abuseGreat dialogue betwen Louie and Tony in the card game scene. What a surprise, a tie-in with Cleo and the Babe. Sneaky! Oh my, Louie remembers seeing Bogg, Jeff and Cleo disappear in front of them. Oh this IS getting good! One thing any Voyager worth their salt should remember, never forget to bring along the jug of water when you are eating sausage and pepper sandwiches. And this chapter ends with another cliffhanger. Truly exciting!
VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 3,
abuseWow, Bogg met HG Wells. Of course as always, Bogg has to get snagged in the net of romance. Oh someone has definitely been brushing up on their NY history... interesting! I can't believe it, Bogg and Jeff's trapped in the past, in danger and communicating with an older Jeff is in an alternate time line in the future with no idea about his relationship with Bogg. Can this get any more complex? And what's with this Nicky character? Why does he want to get into the barn so urgently? Could it be Lucky's stash he wants? Great chapter!
VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 2,
abuseOMG! ROFLOL! A turkey and cheese sandwich? You must have been starving when you wrote this one! LOL! Unfortunately I never saw the movie you based this story on, but so far it's quite intriguing. Oh my, talk about a time paradox. Jeff talking to Bogg in the past...the suspense can't get any better.
VoyagersFan
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseFOOD! I just can't believe you would start a story with FOOD! LOL! I may have to try Tricia's chicken recipe. Excellent description of the ham radio. That's right Jeff... ol' Lucky could have buried some bodies in that hidden room. Oh, creepy. Good work!
HiBob
2008-05-18
ch 8,
abuseI found your story today and thought it wonderful. It had the right blend of tension and humor as well as a good story line. My compliments to your skills.
Maria Elena
2008-04-28
ch 8, anon.
abuseHey Mrs Bogg I miss talking to you, but anyway great story I loved it. Like always you are an excellent story teller and writer. Love it!
DaynaWayna
2008-04-09
ch 8,
abuseWow G! I loved it! :) It was awesome that you had them come back and let Tricia see Jeff! I almost cried! aww! I love your flair for family love... it's so amazing how you write it.

Great job with the young Jeff/older Jeff... that whole thing was way cool! And of course Tricia falls for Bogg... she's a girl!LOL DRAKEULA!?! ROFLOL! OMG too funny! And way to kick hiney guys! Loved that last bit before Older Jeff and Tricia fade.

Phineas getting a massage, eh? LOL That was brilliant. :) LOVED it! And Ralph attacking Bogg, too funny! It couldn't have been any other way though.

However... I do have a question about Tricia and Jeff's ages. You said she was 13 when Jeff was born, and she was 20 when Bill and Kathy died... now unless there's some "new Math" I'm missing out on, that made Jeff 7 when his parents died. So I am are for to being more than a bit confuzzled.

I apologize for not reviewing every chapter... but know I ALWAYS read your stuff and will review when I can. Awesome job my dear. Keep up the great work! :)
spencerthekat
2008-04-05
ch 8,
abuseSigh! This outstanding story has come to an end!:(

Finally the boys get a vacation & they picked the perfect time and place for it. Good thing that the Bogg was there on a Thursday because it would have been bad if he showed up on Wednesday!

I bet that Tricia was shaken to see Young Jeff again - that really pulled at my heartstrings. The whole thing with the DOG...ROFLOL...and Tricia having the (well you know)...PERFECT!

OMG - that was an AWESOME way to close this story! Yet another CLASSIC story from Mrs. Bogg! A+ :)
Morgan
2008-04-04
ch 8, anon.
abuseGreat chapter.
spencerthekat
2008-04-03
ch 7,
abuseOMG - My poor "Little Jeffy" getting ranked on by Old Jeff...ROFLMBOPIMP! Wicked funny stuff! The things that O.J. calls Y.J are hysterical - Small Fry, Short Stuff, Little J...HA HA!

YAY for Jeff FINALLY getting to beat up a bad guy! Especially Rossini! Even this one was a creep!

I KNEW IT..I KNEW IT!! I just knew where that money was going to be hidden - you are so sneaky!! I know that History has to stay on course - but didn't you just want to see Lucky get caught...LOL! But alas, that it what Dewey needs to do!

Now its time for Drake to get his at HQ...LOL! Glad the thugs left him in the cellar when they escaped from the sheriff.

Yet another OUTSTANDING chapter! :)
Morgan Jacobs
2008-04-03
ch 7, anon.
abuseGreat fic. I was just thinking about the trial of phineas bogg, What would happen if Jeffrey ends up being sent back to 1982 with no memory of being a voyager, Bogg or the Omni and grew up and became a professor, because Drake won. LOL.
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