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| Mortimier 2008-10-06 ch 1, | abusethis story started just perfect. dark and loomy... but it got off track the moment you made him "superHarry"... it's not interesting to read you know... What people like is suffering and drama and unknown. not that he can just snap his fingers and get whatever he wants... And I still think you need knowledge and wisdom and practice to use magic, spells and so forth. You don't figer out some complex math that you have absolutely no idea of just by sitting around... Sad to see a good start go down hill |
| Shivani 2008-09-20 ch 8, | abuseFinally got around to reading this. One of the things I like is that the necromancy isn't standard fare, but what Harry does with his particular bent is wonderful. It also made me giggly that a life debt, essentially, brought the beginning of the end. |
| mountainelements 2008-09-16 ch 8, | abuseThis is a good story. I love how Harry fights Death Eaters from Azkaban, and I don't remember reading a story where Harry has powers over ghosts before. However, I think the Death Eaters all confess too easily and too truthfully. |
| cckeimig 2008-09-06 ch 8, | abuseRita's article actually brought tears to my eyes. You did such a great job with this chapter, and with the fic as a whole. Congratulations! |
| cckeimig 2008-09-06 ch 6, | abuseIt may not have turned out as you envisioned it, but it was pretty hilarious anyhow! |
| cckeimig 2008-09-06 ch 5, | abuseThis has been a great ride so far. Hate to read and not review, even completed fics, so here's just a short one to up your count for now... |
| Haruka-Hime 2008-08-24 ch 8, | abuseVery well done. |
| Narutoscreed 2008-08-17 ch 8, | abuseAnd a well wrought piece of writing it is. At first I'll admit that the deaths and torture of so many of the 'main' characters was a turn off. But like they say perseverance is its own reward and if I had given up a third of the way through chapter 1 then I would have missed out on a true gem of fanfiction. Well done and congratulations on completing this Narutoscreed |
| Olaf74 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible. |
| Alanna's modern day twin 2008-07-13 ch 8, | abuseWOW i'm so glad that you have come back to us i hope real life is treating you ok. i'm one of your earlier readers...from the time when you where still writing reclaim so anyways i was going to your profile to read "Salair" (which i love by the way) and i saw WIM...and i'm all like AH THERE"S A NEW STORY FOR BATS and i ran around the house like a mad woman screaching. then i made myself a nice cup of hot choc and sat down to read this SUPER-CALI-FREAKING-AWSOME story now you've got the added expectaion from me though to update the "Forgotten" which i also really like. Well thanks for this SUPER-CALI-FREAKING-AWSOME story Al |
| Chocola Emo Shizzle 2008-06-25 ch 8, | abuseThis story was very good. I was a little nervous at first since it didn't have a pairing besides Harry and Luna, but I gave it a shot. And I'm rather glad I did. It turned out to have no pairing, as far as I could see, and it pleased me for them not to paired with. I was wondering how he was going to have sex with a ghost! XD Now for the praise. When I noticed you had this up, I was surprised. I had just saw it earlier on your LJ, but was just scanning through that. So I tried it out and decided I liked the flavour. :] I am hoping that you'll continue your other stories, and I'm sure you will, but I am hoping for a sooner rather than later. But I will continue to wait, because I know if I try to pressure you into it, you won't want to update. I personally find it distasteful when a fan demands an update. I like it, however, when they plead for an update. -Laughs- You don't have to reply to this review, but give it thought. Sometimes the best cure for writer's block is just to sit down and force the words to come out. But I understand if your life at the moment is too busy to take a break. Sometimes my life gets like that, but then I come home from work and just stop pretending to care and allow myself to go 'blah'. Anyway, the point to all of this is chin up, your stories rock, and I'll be waiting for an update on anything of your's I'm reading. Toodles. Oh! And if you ever want to chat my email is chocolaemoshizzle@gmaildotcom. A roleplay if you want will be answered with a yes more than likely. xD |
| sandyrah 2008-06-24 ch 8, | abuseThis was just fantastic. I was hopeful at the beginning that it would turn into a Harry/Ginny fic. It did, just not in the way I had wanted. I loved the idea of Harry being enough of a Necromancer to affect ghosts, and that Luna hung around to help him. I enjoyed the little bit of humanity on the part of the Deatheaters when Harry would use their family, or weird things like the furniture to get them to talk. Well done, I greatly enjoyed it, and I am definitely recommending it to others. |
| HoshiHikari 2008-06-17 ch 8, | abusewow, wonderfully done! I loved how Harry was Dark, but not that dark, but dark enough that it makes sense. Loved it. |
| HeartsGlow 2008-06-12 ch 8, anon. | abuseOK, you mentioned Ron (killed at the ministry), Percy (estranged from the family) five dead Weasleys (Mr & Mrs, Ginny, the twins. What about Bill & Charlie? Where were they in all this?) |
| CloudySky 2008-06-08 ch 8, anon. | abuseLovely. This was fun to read. Somehow, you managed to keep it quite lighthearted, even with all the people who got tortured and died. (Of course, it helps a bit that Harry's friends still got to appear in the story after their deaths.) If I think about it, it seems unrealistic that Harry managed to learn, and cast, all of those cool new magics on Azkaban rations and after a few years of not having moved at all. But I don't want to think about that, so I enjoyed this fic very much (except the opening scene, because Bad Things happened) cloe |