Your poem is nice, but you missed something important.

The rules on this site (you can find them in the posting guidelines) are that this site is for fanfiction only, hence this category is for *Bible fanfiction* (stories about biblical characters or events, etc.), not poems based on Christian themes. This is a critical distinction that many miss. The guidelines clearly state that non-fanfiction literary works belong at FictionPress instead (there is even a category specifically for religious poetry, where your poem would do nicely). As Christians, we need to set an example to others for behavior, so we should follow the rules here. Please move your poem, thank you! :)

I liked it. It shows how we go through life searching for truth, and once found, there's nothing greater. But we still have those struggles. We still have ourselvse to deal with.

This is really good

Great poem! I loved this! God bless!