It is cute/funny. I like it

This is really OOC Bella

Your story is really funny. I like it. Are you going to write new chapters?

NO, NOT AN IMPOSRER!

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I thought it was more funny since I have actually read 2 of the 3 books now.

Add Oshwanza next time. haha. just kidding. don't. no one will get it.

And on the first chapter... I did not understand why everyone was talking weird at the end. Were they drunk? I just don't understand... Alish? what?

lots of love,
HRSC (guess who: i sing many patriotic songs)
mwah.

Lol. That was hilarious! I can't wait for morez!

I think you have something going on here. I liked both chapters and found them really really interesting and hilarious.

Eh, that was kinda funny. HAPPY EASTER!
~Forbiddenfruit12

right.

hi sweety dumplings.
I don't remember my account name, so umm... your story confuses me so much that i went into cardiac arrest. Other than that, be thankful that you are so nice, or I might have to slap you.

Um. yay.

Okay, thatz wash funneh! Hilarious, actually. I can't wait for morez. Pleaze don'tz cut off my 'ere. Wirtez somez more, pleaze!

that was really funny can't wait to hear the rest updatesoon thax