I liked the way you made Ranma into a saiyan(spelling it this way is shorter so I'll do that) and how you still had him have his curse, plus the technique where he makes a female clone of himself is cool. I think you should continue this. I would like to see Ranma in the Freiza saga. Also, I think you should have Akane go with them to Namek and Ranma ride with Goku. And have Freiza kill Krillin and Akane in front of Goku and Ranma to make then both go super saiyan. It would be cool to see(read about) Freiza's reaction to 2 super saiyans instead of 1. Freiza would lose it.

You started this in 2001? its now 2012...and you have 5 chapters...Alrighty then. A fun story.

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Oh this is a great story, please update it!

I enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue it and update soon.

great story so far

FFn has options for those who like to read stories in the format you are using. (Look at the top right of the fic page; full 3/4 1/2).

I don't really mind but perhaps you can let your readers decide which is more comfortable for them.

great story cant wait for the next chapter

Very very nicely done, I definitely look forward to more :)

very nicely done :)

thank you i have been waiting a while for this new chapter heck i was thinking what would happen next.

I don't mind that it was short but i do find the lay out a bit annoying.

Though i wonder liek some others will the those from nerima will get some sort of power up, like someone wishing that humans on earth had the Zenkai of the saiyans though weaker and no tail and oozaru transformation.

Though possible to do a SH (Super Human).

That and what of ranmas love life, whose he going to go with like kasumi?

Or would a female saiyan like fasha still alive and meets ranma and goku on yadra and takes a liking to ranma and so travels with him and goku back to earth? or travels to earth and meets him or when traveling with gohan and bulma to namik meets them?

Then again maybe he gets android 18 instead?

Like would ranma heal up faster than goku and join bulma and gohan or would he heal up with goku and travel with him instead.

Though both story paths go differently as going with gohan ranma get to know him, krillin and bulma more as well as experiance their adventures going to namik and also on namik till goku arrives.

With going with goku ranma learns and trains with and under him gorwing just as strong as goku does when he arrives on namik.

Though i don't know if ranma would join goku in his fight with the ginyu force or leave with gohan and leave goku to face ginyu.

That and ranma getting to wear the body suit and armour that vegeta, gohan and krillin wear.

Though at the end would ranma also turn into a SSJ along side goku on namik.

Though one thought was ranma leaving namik before the wish in one of the ginyu pods arriving on yadra before goku.

Healing and learning what the locals have to teach along side goku and learning how to transform into a SSJ?

That said i hope to see how the hospital visit goes with little ranko likely jumping on her big brothers bed.

Though i could see genma mouthing off either insulting ranma on getting hurt and some pride in ranma but also praising himslef on train ranma well.

Well like everyone else hope the book turns out well and also get more of this story out as like me everyone how as reviewed or read your story would like to see more of it.

Hope what i written helps also?

Out of boredom eh? Well then, I pray that you'll get bored MORE OFTEN! That was AWESOME! Man, I can't WAIT for the next chapter! Just please get it out sooner, okay?

good chapter.keep it up

I think you got the next big Ranma Dragonball Z crossover idea. Been awhile since the last one I read finished.