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| solid man 2008-07-29 ch 6,  | abusewell, seems like it's a real crossover now. good chapter, but obviously short. |
| Reaper96 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseahmazing |
| solid man 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abusewow, so that's your idea of Halo 4, huh? even so, plz finish this fanfic soon! i wanna see how the Halo one goes! |
| mastersmith 2008-06-05 ch 5, | abuseJust read the last two chapters as I haven't been to this site for a while. Ha ha, so this is becoming a halo crossover. Before I finish typing I'd like to point out that the chapters seem kind of rushed, things aren't described in much detail, everything flies by. That's my only real complaint and it's a complaint I have for most of the stories I read on this site. Anyway, have a nice day. |
| JetLinkon 2008-06-02 ch 5, | abuseI like it. |
| JetLinkon 2008-06-01 ch 4, | abuseThat was really good. Update soon and read my stories if you can! |
| mastersmith 2008-05-02 ch 3, | abuseThought this story was abandoned. glad to see it isn't |
| JetLinkon 2008-04-25 ch 3, | abuseD.O.G!! lol |
| JetLinkon 2008-04-23 ch 2, | abusem... good. Earlier you asked me if you should do his childhood or adulthood adn I think you should so a mixture of both but tell your readers when you do. Do you have any story alerts? well if you dont, now you do. |
| JetLinkon 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusequite confusing, mostly becuz i have never played Half Life but, I like confusing... sometimes... well w/e i liked it even if it confused me. Confused is good...sometimes and now it was. I think i should stop this review in case I keep on dragging on and on. That would not be good. ~Jet (really seth) |
| mastersmith 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseInteresting. This story has my attention. |
| VertigoPilot 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseAn original story. I like where this is headed, keep it up! |
| Aphnia_Rex 2008-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis seems to be the beginning of something. Keep writing. Develop the Issaic character and wrap a story around him. |
| mastersmith 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI hope this chapter was an attempt at humor because it made me laugh a little. You have some interesting ideas there. If you make this into a full story you may want to make the chapters longer. Have a nice day. |