Very good, I would have never thought of writing poetry for this game.

Well done, good ryhme scheme. I felt there were times it was getting a little repetitive (ie- use of the word 'verily') but the ending was perfect.

Keep up the good work.

THIS. POEM. ROCKS. Instant fav!

Nice poem! I can see a bit of an iamb meter going through your work...it's a nice touch.

Wow... just, wow. Such an excellent poem that speaks total truth. Being able to explain such a hard place in a poem takes true skill. ^.^

That was freaking awesome. =) You're apparently good at poetry, huh? Well, write more sometime!