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| Michael Weyer 2008-07-19 ch 11,  | abuseAH! You're gonna kill Nadia too? Dammit, wanted her to survive this time! And also, having Anna as Julia was a brilliant move, great work there. Can't wait for more but please let Nadia live... |
| Maverick500 2008-07-18 ch 11, | abuseExcellent chaapter. Why you kill Nadia off? Is Jack gonna kll Anna |
| gaby47 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abusecontinue :) |
| gaby47 2008-07-08 ch 10, | abuseOMG IM ABOUT TO HAVE A HEART ATTACK :s...I THINK SOMETHING BAD IS ABOUT TO HAPPEN TO SYDNEY I DONT KNOW WHY LOL..OR AT LEAST SHE SHOULD SHE HAS SUFFERED A LOT OF INJUERIES IN THIS FANFIC...PLIS CONTINUE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN!! CANT WAIT TILL I READ MORE :) |
| gaby47 2008-07-07 ch 5, | abuseohh this is awesome love all of ur alias and 24 crossovers!! :) nice chappie :) |
| Michael Weyer 2008-06-24 ch 10, | abuseAnother great chapter, dont' get why more people aren't reviewing. Loved seeing Edgar put in there and the Nadia/Syd stuff was fun too. Having Julia be involved was a nice twist as well, can't wait to see how this works out. |
| j 2008-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice, I like this one! |
| Maverick500 2008-06-13 ch 8, | abuseExcellent chapter. |
| Flame Rising 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseLet’s play a game, shall we? Yes? Fantastic. This game is called “Things That Can Write Better Than You”. The rules are simple. Please correctly select which choice can write better than you: A. My left testicle B. A toilet-full of chunky diarrhea C. An inbred midget clown who swims in choice B D. All of the above If you chose the correct answer, D, then you have won the following prize: A spot in my coveted C2 “Stories A Turd Out of My ** Could Write Better” (which, strangely enough was not one of the choices). Don’t despair! Even if you didn’t choose correctly, I will be kind enough to give you that prize anyway. Who said I don’t have a heart? Congratulations! Please continue to avoid the dictionary as if it were an oozing, puss-filled sore on an old hooker’s a.s.s. And good grammar? Well, run away from it like it’s a festering syphilitic itch you just can’t scratch in public. Or in words you can understand: your fic sucks donkey balls, and that’s what you wanted me to think, right? Because otherwise, I’d have to believe this was an actual attempt at writing and laugh the crap right out of myself. Best regards, F/R |
| Michael Weyer 2008-05-01 ch 5, | abuseYES! Sark! Oh, man, I can't wait for him to meet Bauer... |
| Michael Weyer 2008-03-29 ch 2, | abuseMichael Mancini? As if things weren't insane enough with Alias and 24, you're throwing Melrose Place into it? Well, this should be a fun addition to things with Syd in a position Jack's usually in. Loved the politics between APO and CTU and Heller showing some morals. Having Wayne as a Congressman was a good idea too, hope that develops nicely. |
| Michael Weyer 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseYES! I was hoping you'd do a sequal and great to see it clicking again so well. Jack and Nadia, eh? An interesting pairing but a good one. Can't wait to see how this new original tale works. I still hold out hope for a Sark appearance because Jack interrogating Sark is just golden. Keep it up! |
| Maverick500 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story so far, but are you gonna finish the special encore one |