that was one of the best stories i read...great job

Hey, sorry I didn't have time to log in, that's why I'm replying like this. I really liked your story, and I have to say you didn't do to bad on English grammar, not near as bad as other people say. Anyway, I'm hoping for a sequel. One that tells of the new adventures of the marauders and Harry. Maybe a year later. Anyway, great story. Let me knw if you write a sequel :)

Alex Ryder

I fully enjoyed reading this! I am glad things worked out in the end for everyone. Harry finally gets the family he wanted and he is back to the world he was originally from. I can understand the reasoning behind the Marauder travel to be with Harry. I am just EXCITED about everything! I LOVE IT!

This is such an honest, realistic, simple and sweet story I love it so much! Yours is the only one I've read so far that features James and Harry slowly growing to accept each other in a realistic, heart warming way. And I never expected the marauders to come back for Harry, it made me feel awwwhhh of that makes much sense lol. I'm so glad I read this story! :-) yes and I must thank you for writing this too!

I quite enjoyed this. I am sure others have already pointed out the grammatical and spelling issues so I'll just move on to the rest of the review. I foresaw the ending regarding the Marauders a few chapters before Harry actually returned to his world and am quite happy to say I wholeheartedly approve! I was saddened by some of the people lost in both realities, but at the same time I felt the fic was more... Real, because of it. I know you mentioned once or twice how you were unhappy with a chapter/the fic's direction? etc. but I think it turned out great, so keep up the good writing, and don't sweat the small stuff.

Aww lovely story, just read the whole thing. Write more like this please

Not bad, you might want to flesh things out a little more with some narrative to balance out all the dialogue, though.

''Look at this photograph. Every time I see it, it makes me laugh. How did our eyes get so red?" He said with a laugh before showing Harry.''
i see what u did there XD Photograph by Nickleback

This was a good story. Though there were many grammical errors and sentence structures. You switched through present and past tense in one sentence or in one paragraph and it got quite confusing. I don't see why Harry didn't tell Rora she didn't exist in his world, also a bit upset at how small of a role Malfoy had but no matter. I was VERY happy that they were all reunited in the end. Warmed my heart.

YAY! HAPPY-ish - poor Tonks, Bill and Fleur :'( - ENDING! LOVE IT!

loved it!

Aww this was just warm. I cried and smiled while reading this.

This was BRILLIANT! You captured the characters so perfectly; it was really very awesome! Thanks for this. Any chance of a sequel?

Still crying and harder if that's possible.

Remus' death... I'm crying so much right now.