 InkHeart17 2009-10-13 . chapter 1I giggled so much about the pictures! That segment was really cute and moving. |
 pamang 2009-08-04 . chapter 1I really love the idea of Edwards baby pictures. So cute...
My favorite line:
“I keep them right here with the rest of the things that didn't perish in that tragic fire,” he teased.
LOL. I imagine Edward sitting on the couch listening to every word Bella and Renee say upstairs. Makes me wish they really had THE TALK ;-) |
 mssammydean 2009-05-31 . chapter 1Oh I loved the talk with Renee! The showing of dresses, talk about "choices", and all. Renee being pregnant was a shocker. I can just imagine Bella being there. Might not be too good LOL.
And that photo scene was wonderful. I can just imagine a little mini Edward...in a dress! XD
Now was the line, “I think, if I had known you then... I would have been that girl,” meant as in Bella would have been one of those typical girls that Edward doesn't like and thought Bella wasn't one of?
Anyways, great oneshot. |
 Justine Lark 2009-05-03 . chapter 1this is very sweet. it has funny parts (I liked "practically trademarked nonchalance" and "It even transcends species lines") and also really touching moments between Bella and Edward. |
 SaraBabyRide 2009-04-24 . chapter 1I like your story, I've added it to my C2 if thats okay :) |
 kafairybliss 2009-04-15 . chapter 1Cute story. It had a few grammatical errors and some of the things about Edward's past didn't fit into the time period. Overall it was a nice story. |
 brightlywoven 2009-04-10 . chapter 1 WOW. V. touching. I like the idea of Renee having another, human child, though I don't think she'll ever replace Bella.
Thanks so much, Spotzle. (So interesting to read you in another fandom.)
Have fun in "Forks". :)
ME |
 Kari Twilight Mist 2009-04-05 . chapter 1That was sweet. You should TOTALY have an outtake with Emmett making fun of him for the dress and the bathing suit. I can tell he would have a field day. |
 Haley Ozera 2009-03-03 . chapter 1hm this is very interesting. |
 LuvtheCullenBoys 2009-01-21 . chapter 1I really liked this story! |
 CathyD 2009-01-11 . chapter 1I'm ashamed to say I'd not read this story yet. :( I don't know how I overlooked it (and your other Twilight fics) when I read AMoC, but I did. Sorry! :/ lol
This was great! Renee's news was a little shocking, but not completely. LOL After Edward's look when they arrived, and him telling Bella that it was nothing bad, I had a little idea. :)
The best part though, is the last bit where they're looking through his photo albums. It's sweet, and adorable. (And makes you wonder just how much of his stuff from his human life he actually still has.) And Bella's line about being 'that girl' had she known him back then, was perfect, I loved it. Of course, he return line of her being that girl now, was pretty perfect too. LOL It made me go "aw". LOL
Great job hun, this was a great little ficcy, I thoroughly enjoyed it. :)
~Cat~ |
 -FacelessxAuthor- 2009-01-09 . chapter 1I really like this story. It's all sweet and fluffy! It's really good and you're an awesome writer. :D
-CullenGirl76- |
 Sarquan 2008-12-16 . chapter 1aw!! oh so cute. |
 halfadash 2008-12-06 . chapter 1That was adorable. i like that you made renee unhappy with the wedding...i didn't like how it got weasled out of in breaking dawn.
the pictures were a great idea...i really enjoyed this. |
 daphne 13 2008-11-02 . chapter 1aw! i loved it! |