I do hope you continue this. It has a lot of potential.

Love this story, really, it's greatly written. Post up more chapters please!

I really like this story so far. Please continue it, I cannot wait to see Antoinette's next great escape : )

woow, it's a really good story! please keep posting! i can't wait for the next chapter!

um...is this a cliffie? anyways, really good! i like it! maybe u should consider a sequel...?

I thouroughly enjoyed reading your story...scratch that! I love it! It's awesome...please try to update, apparetnly its' been a while...later:)


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I love the first 2 chapters, you've really made the characters believable and so real. i'm looking forward to you're next chapter so please update soon :)

Added to favorites. Can't wait to read more!

This is EXCELLENT! Antoinette is a very well-fleshed-out character, and I especially like the slightly formal style of Antoinette's narration - she SOUNDS like a royal princess, which makes the story more believable. You've really found her "voice", so to speak. I like her relationship with Chip: in some ways she sees him as a big brother, yet they never forget that she is royalty and he is a servant. There's a subtle nuance there that feels very authentic. I also like the pacing: you weave the facts about her and her life into the story, rather than resorting to a clunky "info-dump" at the beginning as many writers do. Your grammar and spelling are excellent (although you have a couple of accidental misspellings that are not your fault, because they're other words, so spellcheck wouldn't pick them up: "grown" instead of "groan," "phased" instead of "fazed", and "conscience" instead of "conscious". That's really minor and nitpicky, though.) I love your writing style: it flows very well and is a pleasure to read.

Looking forward to the update!