OH this was amazing love!!

the characters AND the grammer is awesome hun, i loved that Dean was seeing different things and it was all disjointed but still totally understandable

made us lot think

thanks for the brill read!

That. Was. Amazing! And trust me, that was a fantasic ending. :)

Actually, the ending wasn't bad at all, don't beat yourself over it. The story had me wondering what was happening, and you even surprised me with the last grave scene. Good going!

SPN is addicting, isn't it? Congrats on your first fic! I really enjoyed this-interesting premise, hurt/comfort theme, and a bit of unresolved mystery at the end.

Hope you decide to write more!

This is really excellent - I wouldn't have guessed it was your first venture into SPN fic! I really liked your characterizations, of Sam in particular, and the vioces were dead-on. Fascinating plot-lines, and the way they're woven together really draws the reader in and keeps one in suspense throughout. Bravo - I hope to see more from you in the future!