 desdamona 2008-03-26 . chapter 1Wow. I was really impressed with this story. I was hesitant at first beacuse I could not imagine myself as a Ban x Toshiki fan, but I love good fanfiction in general and so gave it a chance. I'm so glad I did. I was so impressed by what you worte, it was very convincing. The reason for Toshiki haveing a strangling obsession with Ban was very belivable.
I got the impression the relationship would not have gone further than that day, but I think that was a good ending for it.
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