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| aimael 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. Sirius is my favourite character from all stories, all times, and you captured him very well. Powerful piece. Aimael |
| Ridikulus 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseomg so sad. beleive you me i cried many nights over sirius death. everytime i re-read the scene i sob just as hard as i did the first time. it gets me everytime. this story was so sad and beautifully written. i loved it in a sad way. |
| Darren's Wings 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, I cried again. So poignant, I love it! Good title, too ~Wings~ |
| jamie the marauder 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abusewow. This was really good. I liked it a lot. Poor Sirius! Great Job =] |
| Drusilla Braun 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. Great job. |
| GoddessofYouth 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abusePoor Sirius |
| Dodger Gilmore 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuse"He saw the house, and for a moment froze as all the breath left his lungs. It couldn’t be – it wasn’t possible – no – He sank to his knees, then, because it was true. The house was practically destroyed, and he couldn’t go any closer, because he knew, just knew, that he’d see their bodies. It was all his fault." - this was the best short description of his feelings in that moment that I have read. Ouch. I love that you have him love his brother, still. And that you had them fighting at Hogwarts and not just pretending the other person didn't exist. It's better. So sad that he didn't see Remus or Harry before he died. Very good! |