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Lau 5/17/10 . chapter 1
This made me smile, which is better than it sounds.

The only thing I wan't to whine about is that the currence was wrong. Maybe you didn't want to check it, since it was so late, but still.
Vampire1901 10/12/09 . chapter 1
Nice ending! That was the most funniest thing I've read. Thanks for the laugh! And keep up the good work! :D
Perdue 7/8/09 . chapter 1
HAHA. xD Wow. That wasn't completely ridiculous at all. My favourite line:

"Ryuuk looked at Raito like he was a heartless, mass-murderer and then stopped upon realizing that he actually was."
flyflyflyinthesky 6/8/09 . chapter 1
“Wait a minute, Raito! We could trick them… I’ll let you borrow my clothes so it’ll look like you bought some new ones.” - Major LOL

“I’m scared.”

“Oh, was that a spoiler?”

Best things, ever! It's been a while since I actually laughed aloud while reading a fic. This was great! )
SakuraCa 2/5/09 . chapter 1
Lol, the end was brilliant.
Hikari Daeron 7/7/08 . chapter 1
I.

FREAKIN.

LOVE.

YOU.

(And Compster for making you write this. XDD I owe her a L/Ryuk but sh.
Kaira-chan15 6/29/08 . chapter 1
xD Lol this was hysterical! I love it! Ryuuk is so funny lol! :P These parts were my favs:

“You’re a horrible date, Steve. No wonder Barbara dumped you in the end of season six.”

“Ryuuk…”

“Oh, was that a spoiler?”

“I’m scared.”

“… What?” he mumbled, sparing Ryuuk a glance.

“Put your arm around me.”

“… Huh?”

“Please? I didn’t even get any snacks from the concession stand,” Ryuuk said, frowning. “If you don’t, you’ll be ruining my first ever date.”
Legatos 6/19/08 . chapter 1
BUHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHAH!

Oh my fuckin' GOD! That was freakin' hilarious... and now, i'm trying REALLY hard not to laugh b/c it's 3 in the morning & my parents might hear

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA!

XD
osaka-chan4 5/30/08 . chapter 1
Wow...this was funny and well-written! Nice job!
Penname wa Silver B 5/12/08 . chapter 1
Hilarious XD Keep it up.
selena23loveless 4/10/08 . chapter 1
It was so funny! I liked it!
EmoLollipop 4/3/08 . chapter 1
lol. I finished reading this about 5 minutes ago, and i'm still sounding like i inhaled laughing gas! this was filled with pure hilariosity, and just thinking about it makes me want to tell everyone I know about it xD
SprinxMoonstar 4/1/08 . chapter 1
lol funny funny stuff lol
Forgotten.Thirteen 3/27/08 . chapter 1
That was so funny. I was laughing so hard that I couldn't breath.

Defiantly one of the funniest things I have ever read.
Yamia Ishtar 3/21/08 . chapter 1
Lol, I was lonely! XD Best Death Note fanfic ever!
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