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| Mosvie 2k8 2008-07-06 ch 12, | abuseGreat chapter. loved it. |
| Marner 2008-05-18 ch 12, | abuseAwsome chapters-see I did get to read them. ^_^ I can't believe Shuya and Noriko were captured! I thought it was sweet how the two died together. I wonder what'll happen to Laura and Matthew. Good job! |
| Marner 2008-05-18 ch 11, | abuseWow, Miss Hall had killed nineteen people. i can't believe they were captured and forced to face justice, that's so sad. ;_; Onto the next chapter. |
| Marner 2008-05-18 ch 10, | abuseAww, that's so sweet that Matthew and Laura found each other. ^_^ |
| Galantria 2008-05-15 ch 10, | abuseWOW! I didn't know you had updated! I guess I forgot to put this on my alert list... Anyway great chapter and I'm really glad you found time to update. I'm glad Matthew found Laura, but I have a bad feeling that somethings about to happen to them. I like Caroline! She seems very intense and crazy/ Kiryiama-ish |
| The Wax Factory 2008-05-13 ch 11, | abuseAw...I liked Paul and Sandra. I was upset when their collars blew up. It was good how you wrote how they met, and right after that, you killed them off. It made the death scene more powerful. Lol, I'm a rock band. |
| Dark Raven Of Death 2008-05-10 ch 12, | abuseYAY more great chapters. I reckon that Andy and Scarlett will escape with the help of Dave. Also going by your count you said that at the end of chapter 12 40 students are left alive, but by my count 39 are left alive, but i'm probably wrong. Update soon! |
| Galantria 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseI want to know what Dave meant! Haha! Great chapter! I think Dave is my favorite...I love that you always have them start announcements with Beethoven, haha. |
| SlasherFanatic26 2008-05-04 ch 9, | abuseO! I didn't know u did another chapter! I was totally waiting for u to update so i decided to reread the chapter and surprise surprise u had another one lol. I like this one very much. In the previous chapter i noticed the skull haha :P I think Scarlett might win. :D Update soon!! |
| Galantria 2008-05-04 ch 8, | abuseSlasherFanatic from this site or is there another outside Slasher? And..MAX?!! I did NOT expect that! Nice twist! |
| Galantria 2008-05-04 ch 7, | abuseJames has a very interesting story and I hope he lives longer so we get to hear more of it! 14 deaths in 3 hours? Craziness! Haha. |
| Galantria 2008-05-04 ch 6, | abuseI didn't notice that the girl to get blown up was the Minister's daughter! Or did you not mention it? Bradley seems like a major Kiryama type and he'll be fun to read about. I liked you focused on Miss Hall and the other people running it! Great chapter! |
| Marner 2008-05-04 ch 9, | abuseNice-I like Dave now. He's my new favorite character-I always loved those people who are villains but can still be viewed as good. ^_^ Good job-I can hardly wait for the next chapter! |
| Marner 2008-05-04 ch 8, | abuseSee, I did get around to reading your story! I thought the winner was dead! Agh, he lived-I wonder what'll happen next. All those people dead and it's just the start of the game! |
| SlasherFanatic26 2008-04-12 ch 8, | abusehaha great chapter! I wonder what will happen to Scarlett and Andy if Jade kills them! :P this is great so far and i can't wait until u update! :D |