Reviews for Missing Pieces

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rainaria 2008-09-23 ch 11,	abusealsjldlahss~~ Whee~ Can I ask you this though, is there gonna be Lyle/Brainy/Superman? Lol, just curious ^^ Yay fansites~ Lol, Cham you bad charmeleon xD -wrigles eyebrow- Please, do continue~ Its hard to find a Superman(X)/Brainy, or someone/Brainy :)
rainaria 2008-09-23 ch 8,	abuseUh, hi... -massive nosbleed- I think I better go, or I'll die of blood loss. -runs away while pinching nose-
rainaria 2008-09-23 ch 3,	abuse...Again, I blushed~ Lol, sorry xD But you really are a great writer, and one of my top 10 fav writers~
rainaria 2008-09-22 ch 2,	abuseWhee~ I think I blushed. Haha xD
andromeda 01 2008-09-19 ch 11, anon.	abuseUpdate soon cause this is fantastic.
Dragon up a tree 2008-08-19 ch 11,	abuseI just realized i hadn't reviewed this yet! smacks self But yes, this was a lot of fun XD Yay Cham hugs!! Yeah awkard conversations (on laps no less)!! And yay shirtless!! But what is Brainy forgetting? Lois?
Yaoifanforever 2008-08-19 ch 11,	abuseOh, what is he forgetting! To tell Clark about Lyle? That is the anniversery of Lyle's disappearence? Something else? Oh, I can't wait Yey, Cham has been introduced! And we sort of got to see a puppy-eyed Brainy thats to his shifting abilities! hugs him I snorted so bad at the mentioning of fansites. Its a halarious concept when people combine real life things on fictional work into that said fictional universe, using a piece of fictional work!
Yu-Gi-Ah 2.0 2008-08-17 ch 11,	abuseOMG! You never send me this chapter I just realized it now. I have 10 and go straigth to 12! Dude how'd we let that happen ^_^; well anyway on to the review. I loved seeing Brainy and Clark in the shower together blushes and giggles It was so cute how Clark was like a kitty and Brainy was his catnip giggles And it was so cute how Clark caried him back home that was sweet ^w^. And then Cham appearing like that disguised as PG WAS AWESOME! giggles I love Cham he's so funny. And OMG they have web sites LOL! Even in the future there are insane obssesed fangirls giggles I loved Brainy's reaction to Cham especially loved how Cham still tried to get Brainy to Call him Cham. But he really shouldn't have keep making fun of Brainy like that. BUT THE FACE THE FACE XD! Who could ever still be mad at him after doing the face. And then how he did the Brainy face XD LOL! It was hillarious and cute how Clark ran to Brainy and kissed him like crazy giggles And aw that was soo cute how Brainy knew that Clark did want to be with him but he didn't want to force Brainy ^w^. OMG Clark over thinks things way to much ^_^ giggles Silly superman. Although I did love how when Brainy saw he didn't have his shirt on he still blush and how he blush even more when Clark said that he'd already seen him naked giggles. But the ending was totally sweet especially how they said good night to each other giggles I can't wait to see what you have happen next ^_~ Until then... BYE BYE! P.s did you get my e-mail with the new work-in-project comic pages for BG? ^_^ just wondering.
LuvrOfAnime 2008-08-16 ch 11,	abuseurge... to fanart...rising! Seriously, I wanna draw fanart so bad my spleen hurts! as soon as I retrieve my sketchbook I'm gonna fangasm so much you'll be bombed with fanart (OH WHY MUST YOU LEAVE ME IN MY TIME OF NEED SKETCHBOOK! WHY!) wow, that sounded dirty. and may I add an "EEP I'M PSYCIC!" to the mix for amusment, seeing as just last night I reread all of broken gears and missing peices to get a sups/brainy fix and thought "wow she hasn't updated this one in a WHILE" and what do you know, I wake up in the morning adn theres my alert! WHOOT! Ignore all of that, now on to my actual reveiw. YOU UPDATED! that makes meh happeh! personally this is my favorite story of yours, so it always gives me good start in my day to see the alert in my inbox. And your continueing on with teh sotryline (not that I didn't love the brainy review chapter, that was funny enough to make me snort soda out my nose) but personally, I can't wait to see all the stuff your planning for them. And LYLE! His reaction (and don't deny it, your brining him back, hell you've hinted at it more that phantom girl dose towards brainy and sups... closeness, and thats a lot) a litle consturctive chritisism here, your chapters are becomeing a little redundant in the thinking catagory. They are becoming a higher and higher percentage of thinking compared to happening. Not complaining, but I find the sudden change in writting styles odd. Just a thought. Anywho, great chapter. And the FANDOMS! you included the fandoms. Fangirls are scary enough these days, imagine how bad they'll be 10 years from now, when they can get IDEAS from other species. kudos to you, I pray you udate soon... hey that rymed!
FunkyFish1991 2008-08-16 ch 11,	abuse... this is the unchecked version ^^; hm, i forget how far ahead i am... absolutely loved that scene where Superman and Brainy met Cham XD awesomesauce
doombunny13 2008-08-07 ch 10,	abusegod. You deserve some kind of magical-amazing-medal-thingy for this. I swear I had so many spontanious outburts of laughing and nosebleeds that I almost died. Personally I never liked the superman/brainy pairing (and hated it internally with a firy passion) but this story kind of stabbed that passion with a flaming fork. GAH You changed my basic principles! :O That's a good thing by the way. You're my new hero :D Write more. Soon. goes back to re-read chapters
amber 2008-07-17 ch 10, anon.	abusethis is such a awesome fic it saddens me to see a lack of updates for it :( is it on hiatus or something? or have you just lost interest in the story.
Katereana 2008-07-02 ch 10,	abuseO.O No! Please you need to write another chapter...I am so intrested! I love your story I read the first one, Broken Gears, deviantart...you didn't post the second part on there so I went on fanfiction to see if anyone had written a pairing like it and I found yours again! I love the story and would love to see you update it. I am currently working on many other stories one of which is a Naruto story, and an Ironman story... I need to update on both but that is a different matter. Feel free to check the two stories out.
Dragon up a tree 2008-06-10 ch 10,	abuseAw^^ So cute. I was actually hoping to see something from Brainy's point of view. Hehehe, Brainy looking at ** brought up some funny mental images! And BB's protectivness was sweet but come on, it's Clark! Forcing anybody to do anything is a near impossiblity for farm boy. Unless you count that time with the scent sensory overload...but that got kaibashed real quick so i don't. Cannot wait for the next chapter!! Woot!
Dragon up a tree 2008-06-10 ch 9,	abuse...Lady Priestess, you're going to give me anemia with all these nosebleeds...;D Smexy, sweet and...informative to say the least. I'm going to be blushing, and grinning, the rest of the day XD I like the whole mixing scents thing. But i get the feeling the bond is going to bite somebody in the ** (and not in the fun way) someday...

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