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GothicAnn87
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Alicia Blade reading this story of yours was wonderful.
You wrote it lovely and I enjoyed reading it.
I also did as you requested by friending you on my facebook. ;)
Foxy Megumi
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
for being only one chapter this came out excellent =] i thought a lot of stuff would go unexplained...but you did a great job
Fiery Dancer
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
oh! (my voice just rose 5 octaves)

how do you think of these plots?? that was pure genius!!
i really hope you publish your own book - the world needs some more of the this FANTASTIC writing, believe me

i may suck at writing but im a world class reader, and i will never forget this story! its just so cute! and happy, with serious issues and everything to balance it out!!

and i love the ending - maybe a bit to short for me but nevertheless very satisfactory!

thanks for that brilliant(!) story!
ladyhawk89
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
that was cute ^_^
xShadowMaskx
2009-05-23 . chapter 1
Wow! This was just... Sweet! I have always loved Fairy Tales and their remakes. With this, you just gave it all a new, adorable feel. I love how you pulled in all the other characters and that reader could see their personalities even if they appeared for, say, three paragraphs. I am glad I stumbled upon this. Great job! ^^
AnthyRose
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
I had a nice lovely review typed out for you; unfortunately it was lost when I attempted to post it. The general gist of it was this: I have never been a particular fan of Puss in Boots, but this rendition was quite beautiful. More than beautiful even. You have an eye for writing. The futuristic Earth they inhabited was quite believable, even with the sprinklings of tradition all around. I loved the way you wrote Usagi. She wasn't as clutzy as the anime made her out to be, and yet you kept that innocence that is so endearing about her. Beautiful story. I look forward to reading more from you.
BloomAmber
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
Wow.. this was truly a breathtaking fairytale. Good job... I liked Luna. :p It was SOO cute with those boots and stuff...
Nelras
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
I thought the romance was a tad under-developed, but then, considering what this piece is, it's understandable. And considering the way the romance worked in the first anime arc, it's even more understandable. That said, it was fun and funny and my inner ten year old is swooning with delight about all of it--it's utterly fairytale! Complete with a straightforward "Happily Ever After."
Child of Selene
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
It was one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.
Ashlyn Darke
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
Loved the story! It was very creative and original.
Luv-X-Juliet
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
wow...

That was certainly different to what i usually read in relation to sailor moon stories...

But it was terrific, though a bit hasty as usagi was automatically found by luna as she was captured.

But nonetheless, absolutely brilliant.

=)
Lilywyskov
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Wonderful!
i loved all that
very good work!
=)
kisses
Nixie002
2008-11-07 . chapter 1
I absolutely LOVED your story! The entire plot was written so well and the idea was supported well too. The only problem I had was that the end was a little too rushed. I mean after the entire slow build up and all. But over all, great story! =] I liked the puss in boots idea haha
Sylmarien
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
oh that was very very clever. i love how you got all the sm characters into the story in just he right places. that was a masterfully told story. i dont suppose you've done any other moon versions of fairytales?
Roni
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
A real improvement over the original Puss in Boots story I have to tell you-and very well written too. Good job!
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