You do know its not tolled its told

Thanks for adding the ending. And I'm really sorry that people were leaving nasty reviews. I don't understand how people can do that, honestly.

Nice story !

sorry for not reviewing if you happen to be the youngest in the family you know what it 's like for rhen to hog the comp and for exams to try and commit murder on you .anyway girl the story was going great you shouldn't have rushed the end go into detail about how she fell inlove with fang and sorted out the iggy thing you're a great writer ,really good at what you do please don't let them get you down again girlfriend you gotta admit they are incredibliy stupid and ridiculously petty people in this world they b* about EVERYTHING f* them girl and keep on writing i'm not the only person oout there who likes you're story it's a sheme to disappoint us especially when we like your work some people suck at writing trust me i've read ALOT and you are definitely not one of them not even close frig them and update soon

BOO! The right way to solve that problem was to use this magical thing called spell check

The story's good but there's alot of missing words and using the wrong forms of words (like u say tolled and its spelled told) and lots of spelling mistakes (like ketch up instead of catch up) but other than that its good

i am n love
now review
or else bad things will happen 2 u

AWESOME ending!!

Better than nothing I guess, thanks.
~Jayy

wow that one way 2 end it.
look and mt bffs and i new name thing. i will weite on there a lot more. so u should go on it. its /u/1513067/dark_carman_and_black_rose
write on
-rose

Well not as good as a chapter, but good ending.

Well, er, great attitude. That'll get you, very far in life. But, you know, it's your decision I guess, as far as what you want to do with your story. And, I mean, you should totally start another fic. Get rid of all those people that put you down and stuff. All those bi tee cee Ach es.

You know, my - cough - friend gave me this quote about giving up the other day. I can't really remember it, but it was like, "if you fail, try again. If you fail again, don't be stupid and just give up already."

Well, it was something like that. Yeah, he's kinda stupid, I know, but suprisingly fun to flirt with. I'm getting off topic. My POINT is that he's wrong. I mean, trying is good, right? MY teacher has this one poster on the wall that I keep staring at that says, like, "10 ways to find success" and it's kind of pointless but basically it starts with "Try Again" and everything else starts with try and number ten is "Try." It's green and pretty. But my point is, I think the poster is stating something. That we should TRY. As in not just give up on a story because some people (not that they were particularly WRONG) decided to voice their (apparently not very valued) opinions.

Now, really, I'm not saying the story was great. Because it wasn't. But it wasn't horrible enough for you to stop writing it. I mean, you had a bunch of reviewers. So obviously it's not a waste of time.

People flame on this website. They really do. Get over it, honestly. And, you know, TRY. That too. Have fun with your life and boy issues - I'm posistive you have them, we all do - and, like I said, get over it.

Now, you may be wondering why I'm bothering to send this really long review. Well, partly because it's kind of sad to see one of the most entertaining stories die, and partly because I'm bored and nobody's on instant messaging that I particularly want to talk to. So, you know, it's either this or like, talk to (psh) girls. You don't care. So why am I ranting to you? this is a very good question, one that I am currently asking myself. But, you know, I find that I appareciate long reviews, especially when I have nothing better to do than check my emails.

So, lucky for you, I'll stop typing now, because I'm sure you're getting bored with my incessant chatter - I love that phrase. Plus, my hand hurts from artfully signing yearbooks all day. Bleh

THR

You just need time and experience. YOu have wonderful ideas. I'm sorry you stopped on account of what others thought. Always write for yourself first. Then try to fix it up pretty and share it.

It's what I do. I was your age when I first started writing fanfiction(though at the time I didn't know it was fanfiction). I've been at it for over ten years(I'm now 27 years old!). I've been on this site for at least ten years...makes me feel so old. I know the ups and downs. But nobody is perfect.

Spellcheck is your friend though.

You have good ideas. Don't let this spoil that wonderful imagination of yours, sweetheart.

Don't give up!

This may sound patronizing, but you're only 12 and if you have the motivation to write so many chapters I'm sure that when you're older you will be able to write much better! You obviously have a very good imagination to keep a story going for so long. Don't let a few snobs get you down!
When I was 12 I made a lot of spelling mistakes too, but as you go through school you learn how to check your work.
One little helpful point: When you finish typing up your work, hit the f7 key where your chapter can automatically correct spelling for you :) It helps me a lot too!

Sorry you gave up. But come on girl. People were trying to help, but you ignored it. Therefore they resorted to drastic measures. Then you called it flames.

Please grow up.

Take the criticism in stride and use it. Trust me, it will make you a better author.

If you don't, have fun failed English class. :]