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Reviews For: Look Again

Nachtweiss 2008-06-23 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful, beautiful.
Shy-Rainbow 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abusethat was so sad ;-;
kodie 2008-06-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw thats not very nice to ino... poor ino.
Melitza 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseI have a soft spot for BOTH pairings featured in this! There is something that I find very sweet in yuri that I just don't get out of yaoi... and the aggressive "just take" but then softhearted pull-back just seems right for Ino. Well done.
God of Static 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseI really, really like this one. Great job on making us feel for Ino
Pyrobee 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseNo!! That's so depressing. Poor Ino...
darkrainlove 2008-03-25 ch 1,	abuseAww, thats so very sad... Umm, you should think about changing the part about the moonshine coming through the window, at first I was like how can you people be so calm when someone's pitching moonshine(alcohol) in your window...w/e...good job though on the story=) -DarkRainLove
Schwarzwind 2008-03-23 ch 1,	abuseIn my personal opinion, it would have been better if Ino had kissed Sakura. It also would have helped if we could have gotten just a tiny bit of Sakuras perspective, so we could see if she had any hidden feelings for Ino. One last thing, I could have done without that "a week later" bit at the end. Sasuke's a prick.
strawberries and napkins 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseWow, how many emotions can you pack into four hundred short words? This was excellent. If I write anywhere near as well as you by the end of my lifetime, I'll be an accomplished woman. ;] My two favorite lines would have to be: [She has to wonder why, why did it take her so long to realise how beautiful this girl is?] and [They are almost touching… But they don’t.] Also, I am so surprised you were able to portray such raw emotion in third person point of view. I'm glad you used that POV, too. It did the fic good. ;] And the end...heart-breaking and humorous with it's bluntness at the same time. Thanks for taking the time to write something as beautiful as this. -san
heartless ghost 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseEmotional and deep, nice twist to their friendship ^^
Hedonistic Opportunist 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseVery powerful and, believe it or not, my first time reading Ino/Sakura. So, you debauched me in a way – not that, I mind. I've had an inkling to read this pairing for ages. I thought this was extremely and you pulled this piece off beautifully: the repetitions of words reinforced the emotion in this piece and gave it something desperate. I think Ino's feelings were raw and felt very real to me. What really impressed me, though, was your detailed description. I don't know how you pull it off, but you manage to pack in so much imagery into your pieces that it's astounding, really. I think that, again, most authors would have needed another thousand words to convey the despair and hopelessness of Ino's situations... and her internal struggle to grasp the chance or not. The last sentence killed me -- it was total slap in the face. Anyhow, the imagery of the moonlight streaming in and Sakura's physical attributes was fantastically written and erotic as well. You did a wonderful job portraying Sakura through Ino's eyes. I don't have more to say. In fact, I fee like an idiot for having said that much. But I just had to review this.

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