write more!

hey that was great. when are you gonna write another chapter. and please write one for velvet skin 2!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!

Yay! I'm so very glad this finally happened! Whew...

But, now the question is, what's going to happen next?

Nice job on this chapter!

It's good to see you back! I was hoping you would continue!

Wow... a lot going on in this chapter. He didn't exactly refuse Popuri... it was just complicated... Great job on this!!

awe! bunny! yay!
=)
I liked this chapter. Poor Aaron is having a rough time.

good god.

Honestly, you have the potential of...well, it would seem biased to say an author, so let's cut this short and say YOU ARE DAMN GOOD. I love those little one-liners you throw at the end of the passages, and how everything seems to connect within all those transitions. The emotion is beautiful.

:)
sweet

tsk, tsk. silly Karen.
I really like this story. It's so cute! HM64 is my favorite, too =)

awe! I love this! Popuri is the cutest ever.

Awesome! Must add this to my PDA.

Wow... this fic is interesting and I'm actually liking it a lot. I love how rain is used in here because I love rain too like crazy! Great job!

Well, this story's interesting. You've got a beautiful writing style, and you're AMAZING at writing the fluffy material that (I'm sure) will become a focus of the story. Kudos. :) You also get bonus points from me because I love Popsie.

However, there is a point I think you should consider: in the beginning of this chapter, you put Aaron OOC, it seemed to me. The excessive cursing (in his thoughts as well) caught me by surprise and just didn't feel right in there. I'd suggest choosing the placement of swear words by judging when they're absolutely necessary.

I also don't want to say it, but Aaron seems a little Stu-ish to me. But that's my opinion. I mean, you describe him as amazingly good looking but hating all the giggling girls (love that twist by the way), but it seems odd that you have him putting up with Popuri so well--even falling for her--seeing as she epitomizes what he despises. But that's just my take. As the author, you may have a completely different viewpoint and may choose to ignore me entirely. ;)

Good luck with the rest of your story!

~Tanookie

Yay! Jack(aaron, what ever)xPopuri. I've recently become a fan and am happy for a good fic.

update soon.