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| Ninjababe 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abuseI adore this story... It's just so wacky and off-the-wall, but in a strange sense, it works! Going onto my favorites, so I can read it again when I need to laugh enough to fall out of my chair, gasping for breath... |
| Vilkath 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseFunny stuff but I have to say one the best aspects of this story so far is having Perenelle Flamel be evil for a change. The Flamels rarely have any important part to play in any Harry Potter story and if they do they are usualy dead or portrayed as the perfect loving elderly couple. Nice to see a vindictive old women for a change, more logical as well. The way cannon and most fan fics portray them as super kind giving people who don't mind that Dumbledoor and some school kids destroyed their most precious item and sentenced them to death was always a little hard to swallow. You can't surive hundreds of years in the cruel world, let alone the British wizardind world if you were that naive and whimpy. |
| Vilkath 2008-06-24 ch 6, | abuseWay better ending then I expected. For a while there it almost seemed like every one but Harry was making out like a bandit. The twins had super rare materials to work with, Sirius and Remus got super hot babes they don't really deserve. But the end bit about having Harry be on a dating show surrounded by the equivelent of the wizarding worlds super models was a nice touch. And ofcourse as the mayor of Hot-Chicks-Vile, who says he can't have more then one wife? In the end the amusement park bit totaly sould me on this entire story's worth. I have seen Harry do a lot before in fanfiction, run to another country, even set up a town or school before. But to build his own amusement park is a new idea to be sure. |
| luvdarkharry 2008-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseA 'Blind' Bat...wouldn't have echo location? :-) This is extremely funny. And Snape is creepy, planning to murder old widows after having himself written into their wills. |
| maritinkerbell 2008-06-13 ch 6, | abuseHahaha! This story was hilarious! I especially liked Hermione's evil dating show plot. I must protest your taste, however. Heart of Darkness was the most boring book I've ever had the misfortune of reading. There's a reason all the men on the boat are falling asleep while listening to the story, and it's not because they're tired! Anyway, GREAT JOB! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! |
| twistyguru 2008-06-09 ch 6, | abuseAARGH! Horrible! Awful! Terrible! I think I injured myself laughing so hard! You should be ASHAMED for writing such VILE, EVIL stuff. More, please... |
| Mechconstrictor 2008-06-07 ch 6, | abuseGreat Story. I read Rorshach’s Blot's stories then found this one. |
| Guile 2008-06-06 ch 6, | abuseA truly hilarious story - you really captured the essence of what made Rorschach Blot's idea so funny. |
| avalokannon 2008-05-31 ch 6, | abuseOh, yes.Thoroughly enjoyed this one. An excellent choice for a title: it kept me laughing at various points of the story. Wacky ideas, as you promised, served with appropriately tempered straightface. And the end, the climax, the corking of the bottle, appropriately foaming -- at the mouth. Poor Hettie. The horrors of long life. Thank you. |
| oldman543 2008-05-30 ch 6, | abusegreat. i laughed quite a bit. |
| Cateagle 2008-05-28 ch 6, | abuse*wicked chuckle followed by a long, low, evil laugh* Oh, that's just plain inspired writing. I can just see Harry pulling something like that off and becoming a very large financial force in the wizarding world, which then translates into other kinds of power, especially with what he knows - about who - and what he can do. My compliments on a delightful and thoroughly enjoyable story. I'm glad I waited, I needed some cheering up today. |
| g-b610 2008-05-28 ch 2, | abuseI really like this story. it is very funny. |
| TeddyLupin67890 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseJust read this story and I'm not sure whether to beg you to continue writing or to give you the email address of a psychologist that I work with... Truthfully, I love you work and I hope that you will keep writing. Thanks! |
| SSC 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseHa! Yes, this did remind me of Rorcharch's Blot. You write the same kind of utterly marvelous insanity. Good! This was a very amusing read. Thank you for brightennig my day. |
| Fae Child19 2008-05-13 ch 6, | abuseLoved it! Truly wonderful job, I couldn't stop laughing! |