NO CORREZIONE BLINK AND DAVEY ARE BASTARDO GAIOS TOO.

RACESTRACK IS A LEI E UN BASTARDO GAIO!

Aww, poor Jack and Davey!

Update soon! (:

-Amyy (:

This wasn't as nearly as sad as the other ones. I mean, it was awesome as usual, of course. You wrote brilliantly, and I was like "SEXUAL TENSION!" through, like, all of it.

But it didn't make me cry.

Perhaps that's because I like blush better. hm...o.0

:)

I still loved it like woah, I was just making a statement.

yup, yup, yup.


Moments later, Jack’s hands took charge. From the vantage point of David’s pectorals, Jack’s hands said, “Now hang on just one cotton-pickin’ minute!” and pushed away from David. Sit took a few minutes for the message to get to Jack’s brain, so Jack and David spent the next moments breathlessly staring in each others’ eyes. Then Jack’s brain caught up with the show and he blurted, “Oh, shit. David—Davey, hang on.”


Dude.

Yes.

*loves*

Ah, no. I wish they could stay together!

Gah, they're just so adorably cute together. (:

I hope you update soon!

-Sunstar (:

AW! that was so sad but liked it any way! i really hope thats not the end of everyones relationship though.

*pout* That's not fair. Not completely unexpected, but still completely sad. It's beautiful though, you've done a wonderful job with this.

Miniola

Ahh, that was sad.

But very beautifully written.

I hope you update soon, this was a wonderful start!

-Sunstarr (:

oh. my. god.

this is seriously really, really, good.

It's borderline amazing.

It's like your greatest work to date.

the angst was beautiful, the discriptions were excellent (the cat thing with Spot...YES!) and the ending...

"He didn’t cry, but his fist balled up tight enough to make the bones creak and the muscles cramp, and he punched hard enough to leave a permanent dent in the wall by his bed."

Dude.

I am speechless.

Good job.

**gives you love**

I hope I gave you enough praise that you deserve. I was blown away by this oneshot.

update soon!