 highland girl 1592 2009-05-05 . chapter 5Aww,how sweet.Techie altered the story
so Jonathan would have to kiss Al.:D
It's a good thing for Jonathan that the
Captain and Techie didn't know the original
ending to the Sleeping Beauty.Or Jonathan,
for that matter.lol.Jonathan isn't a swearing
or cursing man,but he would have said something
like,"No,*ing way,Am I going to do that!"
(more expletives deleted).I'm sure YOU know
how the Sleeping Beauty spell was broken!;)
To those who don't know,it involved some intimacy
(read sex)and twins being born.lol.
Jonathan,Sir Scare of Crow(!)That was fast thinking
on the Captain's part to come up with a good name
for Jonathan.
But I like Sir Squishy of the Rumbling Tummy,even better!
And Jervis will certainly love his new toy.
A wonderful story all around.:D |
 Jen Rock 2009-04-19 . chapter 5This was awesome. I loved all the little geeky references and the ending was just perfect. I hope Jervis enjoys his new toy. |
 DrakkenWasHere 2009-04-17 . chapter 5Aw, a perfect ending!
I'm so pathetic...The moment you mentioned "jazz music" I immediatly linked to the Warner cartoon. Just too cool for school, toots.
Overall, I think it was the perfect story. Though a part of me wonders how much Jervis is enjoying that gift... |
 Protector of Canon2 2009-04-16 . chapter 5Ok, this was really, really fun. The imagry was great, I loved the random reference to the kraken at the base of Mount Doom (wasn't Mount Doom in a desert?) and I'll probably wake up giggling some time in the next week at the thought of a cow in shock. |
 WhySoSerious1992 2009-04-10 . chapter 5Sleeping Beauty? That's priceless XD |
 Teh Soul Cookie 2009-04-10 . chapter 5Awesome! Lawl...Al was Sleeping Beauty and Squishy was her prince! And I would SO want to eb a pirate too!! Arg, matey!! *runs off to fund a pirate outfit* |
 GodzPrincess 2009-04-10 . chapter 5“The dragon is no more!”
“It has ceased to be!”
“It is an ex-dragon!”
WooHoo! HaHa! Yippe Ki Yay! You have no idea how hard I laughed at that.
I loved the ending too! |
 invisible hand 2009-04-09 . chapter 5 god damn those other princesses. i hate that phraise with a passion. poor plumber(sp?) |
 lil' augurey 2009-04-08 . chapter 5Hi, long-time reader, first-time reviewer. ^^;
Call me crazy, but by the time Little Boy Blue showed up, I was beginning to think they were sent to 'The 10th Kingdom'. Bo Peep nearly confirmed my suspicions. (Boy, would that have been a long story!)
I absoluely love the ending: top notch! (What will Lexcorp think up next? Wait, don't answer that...)
For some reason, the shutting helmet piece reminded me of Sir Bedevere from 'Holy Grail'... Nah, couldn't be! ;) |
 kittydemon18 2009-04-08 . chapter 5an awesome ending to a fun story, i was so close with my guess, can't believe i didn't think of sleeping beauty!
references?
mario- your princess is in another castle- that was great
dread dragon roberts doesn't have anything to do with the pirate does he?
adore the name of sir scare of crow but sir squishy of the rumbly tummy (winnie the pooh?) was fantastic and i almost wish that the girls had indeed gone along with their first instinct, love that jonathan's voice gets all mumbled like that when his helm falls, that was a great touch
can't really think of anymore references, unless the first knight had to do with the nasty psuedo sugar restaurants use
nicely done, looking forward to more in the cat verse |
 Cybernetic Mango 2009-04-08 . chapter 5dsafjhbdsfjvbsdfm,vsdfv
YAY
I caught references!
/amazed |
 Cybernetic Mango 2009-03-26 . chapter 4We make references to Spaceballs all the time in class. 8D
Um
She'd be in..
Hannibal Lecter, drivin him madz? :D
-blinks-
I don't get out much. >_> |
 theatre-gypsy 2009-02-19 . chapter 4You must finish! Gah! *flails* |
 highland girl 1592 2009-02-06 . chapter 4Where would I like Al to turn up?
Why the Starship Enterprise of course!lol.
The Original Enterprise that is!*wicked grin*:)
Yep,leave it to the Captain to turn Tink into a
militant feminist.lol.I'll bet that Jonathan
was secretly wishing that he could have been
a boy just like the Pan.Nobody in their right
mind would ever dare to bully Peter Pan.:)
p.s.I would like to see Al having to be nice and
respectful to Captain Kirk.Although,knowing Al,
she'd probably be either a Klingon or a Romulan!lol. |
 highland girl 1592 2009-02-06 . chapter 3Ah,crucifixion,it reminds me of what Julius Caesar
did to some pirates who had made him their slave
when he was a teen.Those guys learned the hard way
what you DON'T do to Romans!lol.I think the original
theme of Little Red Riding Hood had to do with um,
incest.At least,it did before the Brothers Grimm cleaned
it up.:|Have you read the Little Red Riding Hood poem,
by Roald Dahl? My favorite line is,And she pulled a
Glock from her knickers.lol.I'll bet that the red-haired
boy is Peter Pan.Am I right?:)p.s.Jonathan may be able
to scare people but he can't scare crows.Poor Squishy.:) |