This one is kinda cool - I was wondering if I can publish this in my magazine since this area is sort of up for grabs in terms of copyrights. The Bible is a territory where it's all public domain and the writers are offered a publication here and there. I have to give you credit for this kind of story because it does take guts to write it. I don't venture in this area often because of my dark horror nature.

that was hard to read :l

Wow. Really great story

That was awesomely well written, good author(ess?)

_ One of the many interesting reads in my short adolescent life!

Weirdly beyond weird. Wow. It was sort of rough, almost choppy, but that almost seemed to work with the story. Where in God's green earth did you get such a strange inspiration? Well, nevemind: Tootles-IMP

cool. this reminds me of CS Lewis' works. write more, you're good! kawaii gurl

Really good

Yeah, I thought the same thing. But the story was great, I loved it. I'm gonna print it put now.

It was a good read, but the lack of proper punctuation and grammar made it somewhat difficult to read at times.