This story definitely has potential...but it went way too quickly. They meet for the first time and are passionately kissing? One shots are usually for a couple who has some sort of established history that the readers are already aware of. :)I think this couple really should have a build up to the fluff here. A little blushing and flirting for this first meet in the library would work a whole lot better than these two jumping right into make out session. :) I think what you've done with Reno would still work great though, he would have even more to work with actually. By teasing Elena about something that hasn't actually happened yet, such as a relationship with a guy she likes, he has a lot more opportunity to get under her skin.

I love this couple and as it is so rare I hope to see more on them soon! :)

LS

I like this :) The Hojo-joke made me laugh, just like Reno's actions did

Maybe you could have used the aspect of Elena confused feelings for Reeve and Tseng, but that would make the flow of this story darker... however, I like how you did do it this way :)

Lol, you could also name this story ''Blonds and Books''. But there's nothing wrong with this title, don't get me wrong, it was just an idea though.