great story! you've got them down great!

Aw, this is really cute! You've shown the human side of Rodney very well here!

I like it :)

arhh thats realy cute!

Cute!!

LOL... "Oh," Rodney mimed a sliding fall with his hands, ignoring the sprinkle of powdered cheese they left in their wake. "You know me. I'll be explaining my symptoms for at least fifteen minutes."

"Make it a half hour, and there's a handful of M&Ms in there with your name on them," Keller said.

Very cute.

Very cute and a great idea. Loved it.

Aw, that was seet! and was McKay really feeling... guilt? No wonder those two were meant for each other, cuz i don't think i've ever heard the words 'Rodney' and 'guilty' in the same sentence before now! LOL! love it! :)

AW! Ever since that episode where they get trapped with Carter in that mine, I have been waiting for fics like this, THANKYOU!

I like it! Sounds like the both of them. I thought the tinge of exasperation in Jen's voice was perfect. She accepts McKay just the way he is but that doesn't mean he doesn't drive her crazy at times, too! Nice job!