 frayed.edges 2009-06-14 . chapter 1loved it! it was so sweet. <3 |
 NaylaS2 2008-04-24 . chapter 1Hum...Cute and intersting story! |
 FieryxEyes731 2008-03-28 . chapter 1really well done and nice interaction between the two of them. great job =] |
 mar-aureus 2008-03-25 . chapter 1I like it. I think it's very original, and Chase taking care of her is so sweet. It would be great if you continued it! |
 mxgirl06 2008-03-24 . chapter 1great story
hope to read more soon |
 star jelly 2008-03-23 . chapter 1Poor Chase |
 chaseluvers 2008-03-23 . chapter 1one word...WOW!
OMG. what is going to happen next??
you MUST write more!
love CL's |
 cali-chan 2008-03-22 . chapter 1aw, that was very sweet! i really like this idea of cameron hallucinating that chase is her late husband, and then chase being all paranoid and hopeful as to why this happened. it's certainly very original :)
one thing, though-- maybe it'd be better if you stuck to her referring to chase as "andy," at least until the horizontal line break? since that bit is from cameron's PoV, it might flow better. but that's just me being nitpicky, of course. it doesn't even matter much, it was a very enjoyable read anyway. made me squee like crazy :3 great job! |
 BasilDreams 2008-03-22 . chapter 1*huff* Why does this have to be a one-shot? hm? I really really realy love it! I think you should most definetley continue it! It was amazing! |
 min 2008-03-22 . chapter 1 complete? man, it'll be so good if you continue this:p |