Reviews for All That Is Lost

ThorHammer17 2008-05-23 ch 2,	abusePretty good. There are some SGP mistakes in here that you need to go back and fix eventually, but otherwise you're fine. I look forward to seeing where this is going.
Derra 2008-05-18 ch 2,	abuseInteresting, the tactician now with a new group. I like Isaac, and Bryugen... well I don't know what to think of him. I would recomend you to make the characters a bit larger, apart from that I like the story. Only one question, are you going to put some of the game characters in your story? (you don't have to answer that if you don't want, I'm only curious). Well keep writing, I'll read it. ^^
Mistic girl 2008-05-17 ch 2,	abuseIt's a good storie I wanna read the next chapter. Please hurry up!^-^ Mistic girl
RandomTopic 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseSo... is he one of Heath's comrades? A little more depth would be nice. I do have a pretty image of a dark blue wyvern in my head now. It seems like a good color for wyverns.
Hafl 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseThe last part seemed a little rushed to me, but overally I liked it. The part about tactician's relationships with other army members was nice - short, but giving all the necessary information.