make them somehow fall in love i just wana see how this will work out ok

Ooh, angsty! I love it. With a commander like Yzak on my back I probably would've pulled the trigger ages ago, hehe. She's about to commit suicide over him and then he calls, well done!

The Goose

Hmm, Yzak and Shiho. I'm actually all excited. You don't see much of this pairing because Shiho is such a minor character. Also, being yaoi obsessed as I am, I rarely get to pair Yzak with anyone female. Reading this'll be fun for me. xP

Oh god, suicide? What on earth - er, what on the PLANTs - did Yzak do to her?

Wow, poor Shiho. I see now. I'd go nuts falling for a guy like Yzak, too. It must be so hard, you know? Because no matter how hard Shiho tries, because of Yzak's cold front, she's going to be shot down. Then she just has to keep beating herself up for bothering to love him at all, and that's terrible. And the terrible irony is that Yzak is NOT actually a soulless bastard. We know he feels things - he just never dares show that he does, instead choosing to take everything out on everybody else and tuning out most emotion. So poor Shiho just THINKS he's a jerk. No wonder she's been driven mad enough to point a gun at her head.

Thank god she isn't going to go through with it, though. You had me scared. Nicely done story, even if you left me wanting more of a resolution. :P

wow
never knew i look forawrd to reading such angsty stuff :D
it's good
keep them coming!

That was soo sad/angsty. Shiho suicidal feelings = tragic. Really well written, so I have no complaints. Amazing heartbreaking...and strangely enough really realistic. :D

darnit, it was well written and everything but i just didn't like seeing Shiho so suicidal, it's awful...not even yzak is worth killing yourself over-but then his phone call did save her, so maybe you were trying to show it's okay?