Y'know, I never figured out why anime!Sloth was all... Water-y. 0.o What does that have to do with laziness? Water only runs downhill, I guess...

Heh, I kind of liked Sloth for his stupidity... Or not really... he was kind of annoying, but... not... -CONFUSED-

-sigh- Poor Ling... He was so awesome before he got homunculusified... D:

Nice crossover between anime and manga. Good little story.

the story has a nice introduction with great background on characters. the way you have the characters actions adhere to their personality. i would make an oc at least as a background character at least.

I feel sorry for the manga Sloth...