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| Matsuo Emi 2008-07-25 ch 12,  | abuseI love this story, you really know how to make a reader come back for more! Your writing style is excellent, and you handle the characters very well. Thanks for a new spin on a good idea! |
| Aelibia 2008-07-25 ch 12, | abuseI think that throughout all of this, I'm most worried about what will become of Pein and Konan. They're so gung-ho about making things peaceful and great for everyone, and don't seem to care about the people that get in their way. I wonder if they'll ever find a place to really fit in, or if that's impossible and they'll be killed for all of their good intentions. Hmm. |
| momoke 2008-07-24 ch 12, | abuseWell, I am officially converted into a DeidaraSakura fan :) Fantastic chapter, by the way. Sakura's gradual corrosion of her old self and the subtle changes in the way she thinks - all written so so expertly and intricately! I can't wait to see what'll happen next. Good luck with chapter 13! |
| QueenOfHalf-BakedIdeas 2008-07-23 ch 12, | abuseI love how the chemistry in the story makes my heart want to jump out of my chest along with Sakura's =) you have such a talent for getting others to empathize with such fantastic characters in imaginary situations...especially during the passionate parts. haha you have a passion for passion. i love your work, i hope to see more soon! |
| Tarutaru 2008-07-23 ch 12, anon. | abuseWow! Your intricate plotline is just so wonderful. Sakura joining the Akatsuki with a twist. This chapter was also intense. Is the story coming to an end already? Nsruto's the next target. Thus it would probably force Sakura to act and perhaps reveal her true intentions to the Akatsuki, right? I hope it won't end soon. Hmm just an irrelevant question: a human being can actually go a week without water? O_O Or is it just because these people are abnormal and they have chakra to support their body. Anyways great work. Continue! |
| anon 2008-07-20 ch 12, anon. | abuseI love this story! It is one of the best naruto fanfiction I've read so far (and I have read a lot over the years!) I like the development of sakura and deidara relationship changes slowly over time it doesn't feel rushed. thanks for your hard work. I'll be early waiting for the next chapter. |
| Random Reader Person 2008-07-19 ch 12, | abuseWho cares about such tiny details, it's your story. Hell right now I'm more interested in this than the manga. Keep up the great work. I've got my finger crossed til the next update. |
| Cayleigh-Chan 2008-07-17 ch 6, | abuseKisame chuckled. “I never knew my parents." HA HA! Why does that make me think of the shark guy from "Finding Nemo"? "I NEVER KNEW MY FATHER!" *cry cry cry* Ha-larious! Cayleigh-Chan |
| annikacan 2008-07-17 ch 12, | abuseThat was intense! I'm sure anyone would be dead to the world after 7 whole days of strain. Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. |
| anyunghashimnika 2008-07-17 ch 12, anon. | abusei never usually read deisaku but this is just awsum!! :D great jobb!! i cant wait to read wat happens update soon! |
| roxnroll 2008-07-16 ch 12, | abuseThat was really awesome. I can't wait to read about what's going on in Konoha. Will you be including that in this fic? Can't wait to read more. Rox |
| shadow miko 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseok this seems like a vey intereting fic i cant wait for another update so please hurry n update asap please!: ) |
| nami17 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseOuch, be awake for 7 days... and doing something like that... that's hard. But I really loved the chapter. Are you going to explain why is Hidan loosing track of time recently? Anyways, good work! |
| leanna10123 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseThis was a awesome chapter...please update soon! |
| 'Bladefists Girl' 2008-07-14 ch 12, | abusegreat as usually and for yoiur poll, do you think you could pull a HidanxSakura Fic off? ~Gothic Petas |