Ehh, young love. Makes the world into a devastating and beautiful place to be. Sakura was lucky with how everything worked out with her infiltration plan, she was so naive when he joined Akatsuki it was not even funny. And I loved you depiction of Kisame!

As with all you stories, I'm left astounded and fully satisfied! Your endings always prove to be amazing and fulfilling and iamnever disappointed.

Than you for writing such a brilliant piece! You have an amazing knack for writing action/romance stories and I couldn't name another author who captures my imagination as well as you do!

I really, really, really hope you continue to write!

love love love love!

You made me sakuDei fan it's really good story also your lemons are so erotic and sensual, not the usual you find where you can only imaging what it looks like, you also can feel the emotions in them it's really not just sex but making love. Also I read a few of your other stories and sometimes it feels like you keep reapating a few scenes like the bed scene, you used that one three times or something like that, that's the only thing that bothers me. Other then that I really love the way you can feel the emotion poured in trough the whole story, I like your style, it reflects how much talent you have. KUDOS

So I think I reviewed this story when I was like only halfway through it so I thought I would now too :D This is BY FAR my favourite fanfiction ever, and I've read A LOT, and not only for Naruto. Thank you so much for writing it, I've reread it like 3 times now, and I'm absolutely in love with it! thanks! :D

Wow. This was great! I enjoyed reading it so so much! You really have me torn between the Dei/Saku pairing and the Ita/Saku pair. Awesome job I can't wait to read more of your stories :)

I loved this fanfic a lot and I think you just made me into a deisaku fan from an itasaku fan.

I am speechless. This was SO COOL. And beautifully written, with the right mix of drama and humor and... Wow, just wow.

Oh Gods, this last part...wow, I'M going to start crying now from emotional overflow. How very romantic

Oh my god that was gorgeous. This whole chapter brought me ridiculously, embarrassingly close to tears more times than I care to admit. That last scene especially, was very heart-wrenching.

I can't wait to see how all this plays out.

"Fuck this, I'm going to pray"

Best. Line. EVAR.

I was quite excited to see a long muti-chaptered fanfiction with Deidara and Sakura as the main pairing. And so, I set my sights upon reading it.

At the beginning, I was enraptured and was quickly pulled into the rapidly moving plot. What really sucked me in was the unique out-take, and interesting beginning. Sakura infiltrating Akatsuki and becoming one of them - and the fact that she had prior history with Deidara.

I continued on reading, knowing that things were bound to get complicated and interesting. I loved the growth between Deidara and Sakura, and the casual, flirty way they carried on about one another. The way you portrayed Deidara was spot on - charismatic, chauvinistic and undeniably sexy. The dialogue between the two was snappy and witty - and was always fun to read.

I guess around half way into the story (or around near the three quarter mark) I got a little bored. It was tiring to see Sakura constantly beating around the bush about her situation, and the drama filled holes between the two. But I pursued on, knowing that the climax was nearing its end.

I was a little disappointed that the build up to the climatic end was relatively short... in comparison to everything they had to do to reach that breaking point. The battle between Madara and Pein wasn't as detailed as I had hoped, and Sakura was quickly knocked out of the battle (leaving most of the battle between them unseen).

I was also a little curious about what happens to Deidara and Sakura at the ending. What would things have been like a couple of years down the track, you know?

Other than these little small things, what I really, really enjoyed was your portrayal of Deidara and how things shifted between the characters. He was just so in character, and so 'real'. His dialogue was so well thought out, and his growth from a lonely boy seeking recognition was amazing.

It was realistic - and that was what stood out to me. His friendship with Sakura was tentative, slow and drawn out... demonstrating the obstacles they'd faced and that it was possible for him to love her to that extent.

Not to mention their moments together (both friendship and smutty ;D) was well done. I feel that as a character, his transformation was paced and perfect.

Overall, I enjoyed this story and your writing style. I will continue to read many more fanfictions from you, and hope that you will continue to write in future :D!

- My Endless Love

I've always liked DeiSaku but I love them even more after reading this :3 Your fic has made me laugh and cry, a sign of a good fic. There were some really cheesy and fluffy DeiSaku moments, but other than that, everything is amazing. You know, besides the false info that Tobi is Madara lol.

Everything is well-written and I loveeeeeee this fic 3 Finished it in a span of 2 days. I love how every chapter is so long :)

Wouah! Awesome! really good! I like ur art 2. U rule Cynchick!

this is the second time ive read this story. once a year ago and once now. and my,my,my its still freaking brilliant. well-written, you managed to keep everyone's persoanlity almost perfectly. well to sum it up,

I FREAKING LOVED IT.

and no worries, i know in another year ill def be back to read it for a third time!