i love this story. it was cute and had to admit, sexy. love Naruto X Garra pairing (nit very many).

Hm, I liked the story. Sort of an unrequited love for Naruto and denied lust for gaara. Your right though, the epilogue made it a little less depressing. Interesting story though!

hi i think ya story is great you have put lots of feelings it to it and that really brings out the characters.

keep writing stories and i'll keep reading them.





xoxo...

how heartbreaking. very painful but a good read.

the epilogue was a nice touch.

very good!! ^ ^

I really like this pairing. You did a very good job writing this story!

Ta da! I'm here...

Alrightie, I enjoy this story, event with the conflicting pain and emotions. I mean in some ways it's like no Naruto wait till you're yourself and do it, but then it's understandable that if Gaara would just admit what he feels that maybe it would have been a bit different. It works out one way or another.
I REALLY LOVE the ending. It's just soo cute. And again you do really nicely with their personalities. I love it! Passionate! Reeking of possible more to come and all that...
I hope I make sense... heh.
I forgot whether or not I saw any mistakes... which probably means there were none heh.. but anyways, you got the knack for Gaara and Naruto stories. I was looking around for others etc... but there's a lot of Naruto and Sasuke (and you know how I feel about him!! GR) Anywho... *points finger* Keep writing... or ... erm... something will come after you... probably Itachi hahaha.. just kidding.

it was good! kinda made me wanna cry..great job!

How can I put this. First, what an awesomistic story. I'll make sure this is on my favorites. I love NaruGaa stories and you put it out there and I loved it! I think you use some great descriptive words along with some emotion and understanding. Excellent job and I hope to find more from you soon!

-ItachiCookie

I'm sitting here trying to figure out what to say. Rape fics are defiantly not my thing, but for some strange reason I really don't see it as rape. I know Gaara said no repeatedly, but did he really mean it. The way you wrote his personality was he saw a physical or emotion relationship as foolish. Which honestly protrays his character. Naruto had to literally break through that barrier he had constructed, hence the rape, to show him how he cared. My favorite line that sums that all up is, Naruto paused in the doorway, glancing back at Gaara once more before his departure. “I’m sorry, dearest,” his eyes seemed to flash scarlet, and his heartbreaking smirk was ghostly familiar. “But you know that I cannot.” He knew that Gaara would not have consented because Gaara can not see himself being loved. Great writing, very inspired, and thought provoking. Even your ending showed what took place was not out of hate but love. Gaara's barrier is starting to crack. Thank you, Gabby

this was good. ^.^

This was whoa. That's really the only way to describe it. But a good whoa, to be sure. Following the warnings, I was like what could this be?, but I'm glad I read it. It was kind of sad, "heartrending" would be the right word, but the epilogue does give hope. Very lovely.

That was...awesome!

looveedd it!

Good and DARK! Keep it up!

I loved this. I like stories in which Naruto is sexually driven by the kyuubi... and poor Gaara. Too sexy for his own good.