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Blizzardfang
2008-06-04
ch 14,
abusenice
darksentinant
2008-06-03
ch 13,
abuseWhen Madara said, "My Child" it was a complete turn off. Something that made me click the back space in disgust. Madara isn't those type of arch villans that tries to manipulate the young to his doing with that kind of "All wisdom" attitude.

Madara seems to be the modern with a cool going attitude. Yet, holding a brilliant mind.

In the chapter when Madara got the report about the fight between Sasuke and Itachi, he said the word. "Not!" in a sense of minor joke that says more than what it says.

No villans i've ever seen so far ever said the word "not" because they like to think of them selves sophisticated and above all others.

Madara is too different then that. And the sasuke joining the akatsuki?! He hasn't yet, or if not ever. His team is now made, Team Eagle rather than Team Snake.
Cherri202
2008-05-31
ch 13,
abuse“0n o4 87ch !” What's that supposed to be?

And I find all the Wuxia parrellels quite amusing. Keep up the research!
BlackRoseDecending
2008-05-31
ch 14,
abuseGreat chapter!
2stupid
2008-05-31
ch 14,
abuse...Can't Madara just dimension-jump his body?
2stupid
2008-05-24
ch 13,
abuseOh, hello again. I liked this chapter.

Please let Sasuke join the Akatsuki!
BlackRoseDecending
2008-05-24
ch 13,
abuseNice chapter! :)
myth buster
2008-05-23
ch 13,
abuseOkay, Sasuke's reaction to Madara saying "the Jinchuriki I came here for," should be, "What Jinchuriki? There's no Jinchuriki here."
BrokenAvenger21
2008-05-23
ch 13,
abuseInteresting. I think it is a tad too early to put out the next chapter. We don't know that Madara is done yet but pretty good. Sasuke looks badass in his new get up though. Good chapter. DROP TEH KNIIVES! lol keep upt the good work.
TDF
Blizzardfang
2008-05-05
ch 10,
abusenice
Isaac A. Drake
2008-05-03
ch 11,
abuseInteresting theory. Though Jiraiya did say it was a Doujutsu not a Bloodline. People may have just assumed bloodline because all the other Doujutsus up till now were too.
myth buster
2008-05-01
ch 6,
abuseThey should've just dubbed him Ninja.
Nitroglycerin
2008-04-28
ch 11,
abuseStill open to suggestions? I'm not good with names... but...

Looking at his history, what might be most ironic?

Weasel?

Looking at any aspects... hmm...

Bloodline? Something to do with Fire and Lightning? Snake, or something related, like Serpent? Reptile? Slithery... Thing?

What about the Fire and Lightning? Flash Fire? But that sounds almost like Flash Flood [Warning]...

One word...

... Kusanagi? Chokuto? Oto? Renegade? Amaterasu? Mangekyou? Susanoo? Katon? Tsukiyomi? Gokakyuu... going way off now... Hebi? Container? Sound?

... You're probably not reading anymore...
darksentinant
2008-04-27
ch 11,
abuseThere are a couple of thing wrong with that theory. If the rin isn't a blood line, then what is? How was it created in the first place. The whole "fell in love with demon or goddess" is purely fanon. All bullshit i believe.

Jairar frankly said the rin is the strongest blood line in the world. It hasn't been in existence since the founder of the nin'jutsu it self. If what you say is true, then he has been hiding since that very day till now. Do you realize how long a time that is? Much, much longer than madara. Not to mention he would have hell of allot longer time to organize and form his own party.

From the looks of it, this Pein character is too child like, Jairair even said that himself when the two battled. Growing up, you gotta learn through pain, not keep it and use it to go against the world. This Pein character looked like he hasn't learned at all. Hell, he even has his own angel, whats that chick's name again?!

All i know is, Pein is NOT the original user of the Rin bloodline. That is a fact. Why? From the looks of it, Jairar died because he had to come out again to find out who was the true user behind all those bodies. That reasoning itself means he already knew and met the original user. Possibly even close and trained the character himself. And that is why he figured out who the mastermind behind the rin. I do not know who that truly is but if i had to guess...which is pretty stupid guess in my opinion, it's Minato...yea, i know. Pretty stupid.
2stupid
2008-04-27
ch 11,
abuseO.o''

Wow...
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