ha, what games can do ?

laugh...

bravo.

not too impressed. You could do so much better. is there going to be more?

lol. I like it^^

LMAO Lenalee's evil XD

Hahahaha...Poor Kanda!! At least, he got Allen at the end...

poor lavi. one minute he's holding all the cards, and next? he's a feild mouse up against an oni with a club. or rather, a sword.

Man, that was one twisted love...square? And Kanda had no clue what was going on! That's actually kinda typical...

wow, that was beautiful...

by the way, i actually have proof that lavi likes lenalee. but i can't post a link here, so email me at poochie2poochie33@yahoo(dot)com
i also have tons of gorgouse fanarts of them that ca maybe inspire you more to write if ya want ;)

sorry, i meant here: (without spaces ofcourse)

w.dgray forums/index.php? showtopic=5481&st=160

hehe, i liked how lavi went to lenalee in the end ^_^

by the way, check out lovely fanarts of lavixlealee here:



their super gorgous!

yeah, it's great. Um...you forget the disclaimer section...hehehehe, the real mangaka and publisher could sue you, you know ^^;

Give it disclaimer, I know, everyone dislike stating it but it's a must in fanfic.

haha. lol. that was confusing but a little funny. is there going to me be more? i wanna see lavi and lenalee! i love them. please!

Lol... Lavi's getting killed for sure... =)
Error Nii-San said so. Oh ya. I forgot to mention. There's missing 'Sorry's in the sentence where Lavi was appologicing. Gomenasai! >

*lol*
The ending!><
Aw, it was so sweet!^^

'Quite' is an understatement... Just felt that Yullen's sorting out of feelings went too fast.