Very good story! Well written as always. I enjoyed learning more about Ves Ves and still think she gets a bum rap for losing control... though she does need to keep it in check, I just think she is really passionate about her family.

Guess Melo died the way he lived. Im so sad that Maria died. I hope that one ay you write a story that talks about Jun-Jun's past as well. This was one of your best story.

After being seperated from my computer for about a month, I check and find you've completed this story. I love your consistent updates! Also your characterisation! But I think I mentioned that already?
Though it wasn't entirely a happy ending, it's good to see Palla finaly having closure. Ves' line about Palla's stupidity or inner peace was also pleasant touch.
Gah~ I can't wait for you to write more on the quartet! You made them all so endearing! XD

Ack...Maria no!

I can not wait for the next chapter.

where are the big guys when they're needed? Good job!

Oh for Heaven's Sake, not again!

What will happen now?

THat was a real nice touch having Saturn experience claustophobia since she has a fear of being repossesed. Great chapter!

Very intense chapter. Saturn was about to go Phoenix on the whole place.

great!

Poor Hotaru, I hope nothing bad happens to her.

This is a very powerful chapter. I can't wait to see what happens, given that Saturn breaking out can kill her, or at least this is how I understood it.

Dr. Melo kind of reminds me of a comic book villian.Good chap.

That was a very original way of explaining why Palla-Palla is the way she is, I feel so sad for her! I also really liked the scene between Serenity and Gallan, it was just what he needed and beautifully done. I love the quiet wisdom Serenity has. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Serenity can work as a relationship guru if should could. And that man is just not right, using his own children for his own research what a worthless peace of life. Great chap.