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Reviews for: A Tricky Hunt
mssammydean
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
LOL aw..poor bunny! HAHA

But what a nice hunt lol..they were way trouble when they were younger
bhoney
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
Loved this: "It was only fair that his brother got the talking to giant rabbits duty." and this: “Because I fulfilled my piggyback quota when you were little.” And I had to chuckle at this: “Issues later. Egg hunt now." And this: “Dinosaurs do not suck.” “Let it go.” And this: “Dude, we’re hunting tiny chocolate eggs, they don’t tend to be that vicious.” And: “A God thinks I’m cool.” “A God thinks we’re cool.” “He was looking at me.” “He’s a rabbit, how can you tell where he was looking?”
Okay, sorry, I'll stop with the quoting now. :)

And the tie-in to Dean's soft spot for bunnies, as we saw in MM, was so cute and funny. Lots of funny parts, I loved how Dean divided his kids up into fun jobs. And Sam holding the peed-on egg was priceless. LOL
PADavis
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
This was great - very funny. Dean's reaction to Pink Fairy was particularly good. Hope this worked and gave your muse a quick kick - love to see more from you soon. Phoebe
pandora jazz
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
I enjoyed your story. It was so nice to just have the brothers helping some kids, remembering their past with a smile and nobody was on death's doorstep.
You did a great job with your characters.
Thanks for the smile and for sharing your story with us.
Charlie Girl 79
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
Fun fic...loved the kid peeing on the egg and bringing it back to Sam!! also loved seeing the different management styles of the boys.
InSecret
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
This is super, I loved every word :) Nice job!
SupernaturalGeek
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
Oh that was fantastic! Seriously, I laughed out loud all the way through - I totally applaud your amazing ability to have come up with that from just those prompts, and it was as in character as it was funny :) I swear I could actually see & hear the boys as I read.

I had so many bits I loved but I think this was my favourite;

“Okay, kids. You are about ten seconds away from being Team Tinky-Winky and Team Dipsy so just pick already,” Dean glowered down. When the children still didn’t come up with a suggestion, Dean huffed, “Okay, Team Metallica is with Princess Sammy over here. Team AC/DC is with me."

I actually startled my husband I laughed so loudly when I read that bit! Thank you so much for such an amazing story. Priceless!
Amy
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
This was cute. The idea of the boys on an easter egg hunt set up by a trickster is original. Lol. Poor guys. Talk about baby sitting. I loved the part where the kid went to use the bathroom, then ran back excited w/an egg only for him to tell Sam he found it by peeing on it. Hahah. Great story.
Pikouaencore
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
Hehehe, what an excellent crack!fic ! Really liked the Sam and Dean interaction, they looked like they were 7 themselves most of the time.
Nana56
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
I'm with Dean...poor bunny!

Very good. You must know all those kids...I think I do. Really cute story!
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