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| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2008-07-01 ch 3,  | abuseNice, update soon! |
| 2stupid 2008-06-09 ch 3, | abuseOh, how pretty. ^^ Please update? As in more than once a month? |
| DreamingAwaken 2008-06-08 ch 3, | abuseVery interesting)I'd love to know what's else is in the basket) |
| Alithia 2008-05-30 ch 3, | abuseYay, you've updated! I've been following this story since you've first posted; I apoligize for not commenting before. Seriously, I believe your story deserves more reviews. Your story is unique. I really like the idea of magic-users, and by far it's been somewhat confusing, but I'm beginning to understand a little more with each update. I'm really curious about Naruto's other abilites. And Kakashi. And Sasuke, like why he's been kept in the dark for so long. But I suppose I'll be finding that out later, ne? Anyway, it's a nice change to see Naruto so well-informed of who he is and his abilities than Sasuke. Hee, he'll even be Sasuke's superior of sorts... but not for long (from what the listed 'SasuNaru' indicates XD). Anyway, thanks for updating; I'll be on the look-out for the next chapter! |
| Skittlesaremydrugofchoice 2008-04-04 ch 2, | abuseThis is fantastic! I love the way you're slowly introducing the elements of the story as Sasuke discovers the world of magic-users, but keeping us just a little bit further informed. Please write more soon! |
| lunarxshinobi 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseFirst, I like your story. A lot. Second. -dead serious expression- I like your Alternate Universe. Okay, see, I have a Naruto Shippuden Role Play Site already made, and I was bored, so I've been working on a AU version.. I've only had one. big. glaring. problem. I've had no idea what type of AU to use, how to use one, or what one to make... I would be so gratetful if you'd help me make this site. If you don't mind helping me, email me at lunarshinobi @ yahoo . com ( Original, aren't i.) |
| black suede 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuse"...This shop is a shop that can help you...” Sasuke's eyes widened significantly enough to make Naruto's smile stretch, “... but only if you pay the appropriate price.” -> reminds me of/sounds a bit xholic-ish bet hey, u've got me intrigued! i'm loving this chapter! |
| injuiin-luna 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseYay! Good story! Please continue! Wait a minute, Sasuke doesn't know about the murder thing? |