 Alice Starr 2009-08-29 . chapter 16Haha! Sounds kinky. Update soon. |
 doctorwhobeth4 2009-06-17 . chapter 16Ausome!
Please continue! |
 AllThatIsGoldDoesNotGlitter 2009-05-26 . chapter 16It's really good. I want to read more. Update soon! Long chapter! |
 aiimee 2009-05-26 . chapter 16OMG!
Great chapter:)
update soon |
 Akuma-beast-16 2009-05-16 . chapter 16It sounds like Alex is starting to go a bit insane...sounds like fun i want to try it |
 Leeann Minton 2009-04-10 . chapter 16Ok I normaly dont like HUmorous peices, but idk maybe im gaiign a sense of humor. YOur story is hillarious. Normally that would ** me off for a person to take a piece that I enjoy and making it laughable when it wasnt meant to be. Howevr, I realy like what you did. Its really well writen. I love ur personality and i can so see it in ur writing along with ur side notes. |
 oirishgoddess 2009-04-08 . chapter 16And...ACTION! God, I've missed this, if only for the amazing and very tension-filled chapters full of completely impredictable and surprising happenings. Glad Alex is up and about (well, that's debatable) again and making mischief as always. I'm sure it brightens up Hitler's day no end.
Well done, sorry for the super-short review, and keep up the good work (in the sad circumstances of losing your laptop)! |
 AC a Reader and Mellorocx 2009-04-07 . chapter 16This story is going great so far i can't wait for the next chapter!! Best line: "You vill shut up, homosexual man, or you vill die first." Funny as hell in my opinion!
-AC a Reader |
 Just me 2009-04-06 . chapter 16 This story is hilarious, I love it xD
Please, update soon? I seriosly need next chapter, I'm going nuts over here! x'D |
 Wolfmonster 2009-04-06 . chapter 16 Oh my word - I almost died crying at the “You vill shut up, homosexual man, or you vill die first.” bit, lol! Hehehe! Classic!
And Kyle can't die! He just can't...can he? :O I didn't really get why he'd be called a dog though, when Ray wasn't. Am I missing something storywise, or has another one of my marbles rolled away?
I'm loving the German accents, btw - funny is the best type of story. XD Oh, and the special mention! We get special mentions - Wow! Of course, if I actually logged in I wouldn't need one...but yeah. I will one day. :D
Post soon! |
 xXxSmidgexXx 2009-04-06 . chapter 16NICE!
update please XD |
 xox.Aryelle 2009-04-05 . chapter 16nice! Keep writing!
xox Aryelle |
 sheluby94dreamer 2009-04-05 . chapter 16Alex was put unconscious really fast... It makes a good story line...
Just update soon! Please!! You took for ever last time! |
 jesusfreak100percent 2009-04-05 . chapter 16It's really good, and I don't mind if you make Alex... not serious(?, if that makes sense). But you could make his "not seriousness" work out much better if you just fixed the grammar around it, and maybe cut down on the obvious humour. :) Hope I didn't offend, the story itelf is great! |
 Zippy 2009-04-05 . chapter 16 ah! Please update soon. I lurve AR/Cherub fanfics, and this one is particularly smashing. |