I read this and i'm still laughing. It's soo amazing!!

I wonder why I've never tried reading this little one shot before. It was awesome and I love Hitomi's "MSN Conversations" with herself. It was hilarious!

That was so much fun to read!! Do more one-shots like that!!

ILW

So I think this one is so CUTE! Ah I love it. You have such good grammer and flow of words. And I love hot, brooding guys!

Hey Suils, watashi desu!

Kya! Kawaii!

I absolutely loved the movie reference throughout the entire thing. That was just wonderful. I only have one real complaint. There are points in the paragraphs when it gets to be a little confusing. Not a 100% sure if this is a run-on or not, but I would advise going over it and correcting it to make a little easier on the reader.

Absolutely adorable. I am favoriting you.

The MSN moment was great: left brain, right brain.

omg this is awesome. I love how you have Hitomi over think the entire like two minuets that this takes place over.

First off let me say that I love your writing! It's true. I just couldn't stop laughing. Hitomi's monolouges cracked me up! Thanks for the great story and I can't wait to read more!

That was a wonderful story! It was funny, creative, original, and well written. Job well done.

awsome!