I like the concept, but you might want to get a beta reader to help with some of the mistakes you have.

Dude it's spelled Lorelai & not Lorilia. Please Fix it next update

good chapter & more please

great great great!

Good start, very original. Please continue

good chapter & more please

QUESTIONS...

1.Does Lorelai ever find Rory?
2. does somebody find Rory and calls Lorelai and Lorelai rushes to pick her up but Rory finds out somehow and makes a mad dash for it and by the time Lorelai gets there Rory is gone?
3.Does Rory leave the country?
4. Does Rory run into a new man and fall in love or does she find an old flame and marries him and has kid's
5. Does Rory ever make it back to Stars Hollow?
6. What happens on the holidaies does she come home?
7. Does Emily or Richard see her around somewhere and contact Lorelai?
8. Does Rory find Jess and tells him what's going on and he tells her shes making a mistake and to contact lorelai or if she doesent he will and he will force her to get back together with her mom

I really liked this, very original. Sad though, I want to know why she's leaving. I hope she ends up with Jess and sees Lorelai and Luke again. Update soon! =)

Hey,
Could you PLEASE get to the point of why Rory left? She's a good kid. And, Richard and Emily will find out in a millisecond! You should also mention what the time period in your summary.