You are a good writer!

That explains so many peoples lives.

It explains part of my life.

I actually cried when i read this.

I really love it!

Keep up the good writing!

damn good

That is good, but the letter was a bit repetitive...I think it would have been sadder, darker if Vegeta had come in when it was too late, but she was still alive, don't you think?

How sad... How moving... wow. I'm in shock. Very heavy. I need some serious comedy rehab after this one.

I loved this!

Well developed letter and poem, as well as seriousness and true meaning. I give it a 8 out of 10 on my scale.

awwwww. thats so sweet. thats a really good ficcie.

*sniffles* That's just so cute! I was almost in tears reading this! Well done.

Starkiller: Wow, surprise ending...i really thought she was gonna...ick...with the razor and... *shudders* eeewww! Jeice: Coward! Starkiller: Am not! But neways, this was a really cute fic! Love it! .

so beautyfull... and a happy ending. i like it, no i love it. i'm not good at reviews, all i can say is: very beautyfull, very sad and pleeeeeease write more!

A couple errors in punctuation, but that's not really important, because this fic is great. I almost cried... *sniff*

That was sweet!

aww! that was sweet

i luved it!

IT's so good

Vegeta was being an actual person...and a loving father..

sooooo sweet

sniff, now that just makes me want to give my daddy a hug!