Very good. I like you used the repetition to show how he's sort of on auto pilot. Poor Ianto.

Gosh, what a talent you show for a teenager. RTD, watch this one !

o I like. If you continue writing this, I'll give you a cookie :)

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This was gorgeous! I love to see repetition used so well in a story. Fantastically well written, congratulations!

Ianto's first day back. I can buy that

That was really good! Poor Ianto! Is there going to be a sequel? Please say yes! Loved it.