aww.. that's really cute

lol... but poor Padma... can i put this in my C2 Community?

wow...this is really good

ok, now I get it. You uploaded chapters in the wrong order! Isn't there some way to fix that? Or insert a note in chapter 11? Maybe I'll go back and read them agan. Ok I just did and it made much more sense. Please put a warning in for unsuspecting readers like me who don't pay attention to the chapter number. Pretty please?

Oh dear, that's funny. Parvati's vision of Snape getting a tattoo "coming true"!

Poor Cho. Though obviously this was written before Order of the Phoenix came out because we know that Cho cried a lot. Funny, but I like her better in your story! ;)

Well, this is a great story. Dean is cute. I will definitely read some more of your work. Thanks for writing!

Nice scene between Hermione and Padma. They have a lot in common :D hm, interesting tp incident...

I'm confused about the timeline. Does the beginning of Chapter 11 happen before or after the last part of it and chapter 12? Did Padma do 2 detentions? Was the owl scene before or after the maze scene? It probably would be best to put everything in chronological order, or at least put something in italics or write "flashback" to show what you're doing. Or put in a note explaining it.

Lol, McGonagall thinking Filch was calling her "my sweet". You write some funny stuff, and it's all so true to character! Hm, could Parvati's prophecy be about the fake Moody? And what a sweet yet funny scene between the sisters. :D

Great chapter. Poor Padma, Ron is so gone on Hermione. But hopefully she will start liking Dean soon!

I can so see Parvati and Padma dressing up their house-elves like dolls! Have I said your writing rocks? It's great. Ron is so adorably dense!

Nice chapter! I hope she goes for Dean-he's nice.

LOL! That whole conversation about house-elves was hilarious! Ron's lines were the best: “It’s just that…we…we wouldn’t want their little feet to be cold.

Magic-Owl

From: Snowy Winter Tales

To: Poppy P

Subject: Padma's Quest

Dear Poppy P,

I've just finished reading your story, and I'm glad for it. Your story is highly underrated. It really is! I think it's brilliant and it clicks into the story, though Chapter 11 and 12 should have been the other way around, right? Or was it 12 and 13? *is confused* Anyway, nice story!

Yours,

Snowy Winter Tales

That was an excellent read! I really enjoyed reading it and this story made me feel happy sometimes and other times sad- that's really good! Well done!-

Aw, cute. Loved the butterfly clips, the way Padma's crush on Ron didn't just disapper when Dean showed up (unrealistic), the hint of Neville/Parvati at the end :)
chapters 10 and 11 are mixed up. Reverse order

this fic was really good. And very funny too. Youre a grt writer. I enjoyed it.