omg wow this is funny!!

I noticed that he was holding his face, and that nose was trickling from his fingers.

lmfao

Um... I'm confused? I really liked the first part of the chapter. And I liked the second part too, but I'm confused about the Bee guy. That's a cool idea for a mutant though... Kudos to you for thinking up a guy with bee wings. Now I'm thinking of "The Superhero Movie". You know, the one with the guy who gets bit by a radioactive dragonfly and gets dragonfly wings? Wow, this is a really long review. I think I'll stop rambling now -blushes-...
~MarleySkittlez
P.S. Update soon, please?

GREAT stroy, you have a great flow with putting both stories together into one, keep it it up it's AWSOME!

Love it! Update soon! Please?

aww, well.. when you do come back, i hope you update soon! i love it! =)

I liked the Chapter but I don't like the Hiatus. oh, well. When it's off of hiatus then it'll be even better. Update whenever you get an idea!(hopefully sooner rather than later)

o...me likey. me likey a lot!
Seriously i see potential for this to be a really good action romance story down the line but to get to the really good bit unfortunately you do have to go through a few broing phases so...hang in there and keep updating...and i will keep hangng in for what you claim to be the exiciting chapter...if this isn't exciting according to you than hate to think what you think is exciting...

You're funny. I think you've done a really good job of capturing the characters. Maybe not so much on Iggy and Nudge, but definatly on the rest, especially Max. Which is what matters since it's in her pov. Update soon!

aw... poor flock... poor Fang! He is probably killing himself inside. =[ Haha. The end was kinda funny. No, not when they were crying. lol. Like... the VERY end.

just wanted to say i love your story and wish i could give you some ideas. but since i have no idea how it's going to end, i can't really help you out with the middle part. sorry! i hope you come up with the next part soon!

Update Soon! I lave this story so far

Awesome Story so far!

=o o0o0o0o! Floating rocks!! lol.

lol. Haha. Fang was laughing hysterically. lol.

this is an awsome story XD