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| quicksilver2402004 2008-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseWoah!! Another hot fan fic!! This was great!! Good job!! |
| KuronekoXIII 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThe ending just screams "sequel needed". ... ... ... ..Write one pwease! |
| Dark-Wolfbane 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! For a short piece this story is overflowing with emotion! Excellent work here. |
| Zaerith-Chan 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAs a member of the MegaOP club I say, FABULOUS! I loved every minute of this story and I wanna recommend it to the other members! |
| T.L. Arens 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThe narrative here is deliciously potent and the character interaction is wonderful. ;) I'm so addicted to angst. Thanks for writing! |
| Lady Jane 2008-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease continue, this is a wonderful story and one of my favorite pairings, you write is so well |
| PrimeFan 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseNeed I tell you how beautiful this is? You made me cry! I don't know what it is about Armada Galvatron and Optimus Prime, but they always seem to make me do this, stupid cartoon... I did one of these, the post-Unicron thoughts of our wayward Prime. It's on Deviant, and I got stuck, but this is making the plot bunnies stir...just a little :looks at the hoard: Oh, man... But yeah. This fic was awesome and deserves so much in way of reviews and praise. Awesome work! |
| Cyndi 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseOh my Primus in the Allspark GOD...I read this and it was just so...so...visceral and I could almost smell the regret and the longing between them. I have maybe two pairings I like(one is Armada UnicronxStarscream and the other THIS ONE) and you have nailed this. There are few stories that make me seriously feel and hunger for the entire text like this. I felt like I was THERE. You are awesome. |
| Storm Blue Lightning Saix 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! |
| Kittona 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusevery interesting...if slightly creepy... |
| Ray of Starlight 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseDang that was kinda emotional. I've never seen Armada, but I know a little about it. Is that how it really ends? Does Megatron/Galvatron die? I know Starscream does, but I just wasn't sure. I feel bad for Optimus, being tormented like that espically since Galvatron is gone, but hey if Optimus goes back to the others he promised to come back. I don't see "complete" anywhere and even though this could be left as a one-shot I hope it isn't. Great job! :-D -Ray |